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| Roxy 2007-05-06 ch 14, anon. | abuseTHAT WAS AMAZING! |
| Roxy 2007-05-06 ch 14, anon. | abuseTHAT WAS AMAZING! |
| AA Battery 2005-07-05 ch 14,  | abuseplease contiune this- it's really good! don't you dare end it there! I hunt you down... with a towel. :) |
| ElsieNeko 2004-10-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI've been working my way through your stuff, and I must say that you have a great style of writing. It's got the same tone as the show, with that undercurrent of tension. Tighten up a bit on grammar and punctuation, and your writing will really shine. |
| Xandra73 2004-10-08 ch 14, | abuseWhat a great story. I love your style and you're so good with characterization. It's such fun (even that it's so depressive) to read a story that flows so well. That scene at the pool? So haunting. Thanks so much for writing this. :) |
| Jack-rocks 2004-09-21 ch 12, | abuseHey..what a surprise to find this fic here! :) This is a SUPERB story, so touching and so involving (and also hot) ;) lol Please, keep writing. You are doing an excellent work! :) |
| bobdabuilder0804 2004-09-17 ch 11, | abusehi dude, twooddsocks here! Just thought Id drpo in and say hi, and of course, that I love this fic!! Which you already know, or at least I hope you do!! Im also going to use this review as a opportunity to nag you to update! he he... so keep going, its great stuff!! |
| Stacey James 2004-09-11 ch 6, | abuseI was trying to reveiw Ch7 but I couldn't! It's a great story - but I loved Ch 7 - wow - the sexual tension |
| catch22girl 2004-09-07 ch 4, | abuseI am loving this story. You write Jack so well and everyone is in character. I loved this Nina chapter too - not at all boring, don't worry. I have to admit that I especially enjoyed chapter 3 and the Teri and Jack interaction, along with the Kim and her friends part. You're doing a great job of showing his conflicting feelings. Nina's thoughts about him in chapter 4 are perfectly in character too. She's very controlled. I also really enjoyed the first story and hope to see chapter five soon. |
| Stacey James 2004-09-06 ch 1, | abuseI'm enjoying this one - please keep writing! |