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fiestyone
2006-09-17
ch 1,
abuseI think it was vey good even if Helga did seem a bit cruel but I still liked it
Dragon of the lost world
2006-08-24
ch 3, anon.
abuseKind of, creepy, but still well done.
Aryelweb
2005-08-07
ch 2,
abuseI forgot to say - PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE make a sequel!! PLEASE?
Aryelweb
2005-08-02
ch 3,
abuse=( Poor Gruber, he was one of my favourite characters. As was Helga. ;_;
Beauty
2005-04-12
ch 1, anon.
abusethis is a good story,but you made helga real mean! Do you not like her?
TidyKiwi
2005-03-28
ch 1,
abuseWhys Helga so mean in this? Definitly don't see her and Gruber getting together like that
Kimmibear
2005-03-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseHiya-me again.listen,does anyone know about ?! I have been trying to download A.A episodes off there.It's not going too well.Anyway,if you have any idea whatsoever of how to do it,please please email me on Davidsearle22@'t ask.It's my Dads.No,really.IT IS! I SWEAR! Oh,um,by the way.Great story,Serb.Write more.C ya.
KK
Layla Flame
2005-01-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseNot your best story Serb-do better next time! Please dont hate me 4 sayin that.By the way,is that what really happens at the end? Please tell me it isnt!
Layla Flame
2005-01-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseNot your best story Serb-do better next time! Please dont hate me 4 sayin that.By the way,is that what really happens at the end? Please tell me it isnt!
Kimmibear
2005-01-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseNice story Serb,but darling,you made Helga evil! She isnt evil! write more!
Dark Sarcasm 503
2005-01-12
ch 3,
abuseIt was an interesting fic...I felt so sorry for Gruber

It was a very different fic because it came close to reality with the ink triangles and everything...I liked it
ress
2004-12-10
ch 3,
abuseWell this was an interesting fic. I would never imagined Helga and Gruber getting together this way! I felt a bit sorry for Gruber but it was a good fic, well done :-)
Dragonmaster Kurai
2004-10-03
ch 3,
abusevery interresting! gives the story a very different perspective!good
cya
DK
Pixie
2004-09-12
ch 2, anon.
abuseOh my god! Poor Gruber! Oh, what is gonna happen next?
Princess-Of-Dreams
2004-09-07
ch 1,
abuseHey, I like it. Please update soon
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