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| mileyfan4ever 2007-02-02 ch 11,  | abuseomg i ove it please dont torture and not put the next chapter i am begging you to please update soon i love it its a really good story its in my favorites ttyl laterz |
| mileyfan4ever 2007-02-01 ch 3, | abuselollololololo omg this is too funny well chapter four is havent read the rest anya is so funny lol great chapter |
| Mockingbird84 2005-09-29 ch 11, | abuseGreat Stuff!! Please update soon! |
| mandi 2005-09-05 ch 11, anon. | abuseno u can't have them killed! LoL wonder what's going to happen next! LOVING THIS! more soon! |
| Alex's-Babi-Girl 2005-08-22 ch 11, | abuseWhat...u cant just leave it as that who is this other person?! is it sydneys sister...i recon it is...coz who else could it be??! laurens isin jail... right well yeah please update soon...so far it sounds fantastic... tho i might recomend being a bit more detailed on what micheal and syd do...eg facial expression (dont think kinky)... And dont think im trying to insult u...coz ur storys fantastic... ta muchly elfie xoxo |
| Kirs-t 2005-08-15 ch 11, anon. | abuse:D I'm loving this story mate! But the suspense, I hate it :o| Who is this killer person? Top stuff though, keep up the awesome work. |
| jellybelly89 2005-08-14 ch 11, | abusecreepy...update please! |
| eternalgorithm 2005-07-27 ch 11, | abuseholy CRAP - can sydney inject Lauren personally? that would be fabulous |
| genevra 2005-07-26 ch 11, | abusehey. i didnt realise i hadnt already reviewed even though i read this the first day it was 'published.' i couldnt think of a better word, unfortunately. anyway, i feel kind of sorry for eric, truth be told. hiding secrets was never his best quality and against sydney, that would be even tougher. hmm, who could it be? i have no idea who's following them.. im guessing sark or maybe even nadia and the person who's paying them could be anyone but the top four choices are lauren, nadia (again), irina and katya. i guess time will tell, though you do have me intrigued. that shocked me! i was expceting this to be all sweet and fluffy, not have them being followed. great chapter. great writing. til next time.. gen* xxo |
| AtruthLtakesItimeASVS 2005-07-26 ch 11, | abuseOMG...whos the killer? omg...dont tell me that Nadia is the hired killer by Irina/yelena/katya (whichever one of those derevkos) anyways...this is getting god! lol but they are def. gonna survive cuz they always do right? plez tell me they are gonna be alright srry i m just a lil hyper and crazy this afternoon lol good story plez do continue |
| Danielle G. 2005-07-24 ch 11, anon. | abuseThat was a twist that I was not expecting, but it should make for an interesting story. I really liked this chapter, but I don't like how Syd has changed. I can understand it, but it will take a while to get used to. Great job, nad I love this story. P.S- I'm sorry that your vacation didn't go well. |
| Nikita 2005-07-24 ch 11, anon. | abuseOMG i love this story!! cant wait for more!! |
| Piper Chris fan 2005-07-24 ch 11, | abuseGreat work. I havent review earlier cause i just started reading your story and i read it now. :) Keep up the good work and update soon. I like your story cause it is sweet and funny! |
| Lil Aussie Alias Chick 2005-07-23 ch 11, | abusewasn't expecting that last twist |
| lady marauder 2005-07-23 ch 11, anon. | abuseWHAT...KILL THEM...WHO HIRED THIS PERSON?...ok i will stop my rambling...keep up the story it is really good |