Great ending, the only thing that kept me from smashing my head into the wall at the wierdness of the end was my dad sitting in the next room. And I had to cover my nose and mouth to keep from laughing out loud at one point (not sure when) Lol making Brock's song into Misty's.

This story was way tooo cool, but Misty should have ended up with Brock.
GYMSHIPPING FOREVER!!!

wussat called? narcissism? or sumfink like that... iono

oh my god!! That was so funny!! I'm not a gymshipper, becuase I don't like
brock (sorry! *bows*) but haven't it for that she loved both of them was the prefect
touch.

oh my god!! That was so funny!! I'm not a gymshipper, becuase I don't like
brock (sorry! *bows*) but haven't it for that she loved both of them was the prefect
touch.

oh my god!! That was so funny!! I'm not a gymshipper, becuase I don't like
brock (sorry! *bows*) but haven't it for that she loved both of them was the prefect
touch.

oh my god!! That was so funny!! I'm not a gymshipper, becuase I don't like
brock (sorry! *bows*) but haven't it for that she loved both of them was the prefect
touch.

Octillery is hideous and Chinchou looks handicapped.

hi! that was so cool! i must admitt, i wanted brock to win over ash, but it was an awsome ending. i love happy endings~ the fake tracie note was ingenious. keep up the good writing!

that was hilarious!!! it's great! and cute too. i really like the ending cuz you don't see much stories where Misty likes both of them.

Aww...This is so well written, I love it!

AWWWWW!!!! That is such a Cute story!!! That is the sweetest thing I've ever read!!! i love you, man! You write all the best stuff! That was so adorable, you have no idea how tickled I am right now. Perfect ending. You kept me hanging the whole time, and the ending really surprised me! Once again, like I've stated in another one of my story reviews, I don't know how you can think of such good storylines and then stick with them. That was a great story. It' so cute I think I'm gonna cry. :') GOO JOB! 10000000000000000/10 stars! I'm really happy the story ended like that...I was hoping it would be Brock....cause I LOVE him....but I kinda like to think that she belongs with Ash...I think it's due to age. But....Oh man....i'm going to stare blankly and think about that fic now....buh-bye!

I'm voting for Gary but Richie might also be interesting, there are already so amny AARMs. Great story!

Heh heh heh!!! Great fanfic.... Oh, come on!!! It HAS to be Brock, I mean, who else enjoys housecleaning, is a good cook, and actually looks GOOD in an apron?! If I was Misty I would sure choose the Brock!!!!

Yaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!!!! That was cute!!!! Better ending than the first! :):):):):) 9/10! (because u insulted Kenji-sama!) :):):)