best thing i've ever read about them .

YAY for Taito! That was really sweet. I really liked it a lot. Great job!

Gah, so sweet! These two are just perfect together, I agree...definitely gorgeous, definitely way too sexy. XD I love the way there's so much focus on sound in this story. The noises tell the story, kinda. That, and the random objects, like the soccer ball and the sock. It's cool, bringing those seemingly irrelevant objects into such...relevance, I guess. ; It's a nice technique. Anyway, yes, I really enjoyed this! I shall go read more!

Musy pile of goo? Check! That was a pure delight. Light and fun but just a feather touch of sexy to spice it up. Two thumbs up, and whatnot. ;)

*hugs the WAFFness* Love this fic!

Couldn't help wondering if by the title you were insinuating that little musical sign, sFz? just curious. -

*steals taito flags and waves them around*

I totally agree with you. Taito (/Yamachi) has always been my favorite pairing of all anime, movies, and so on.

It was the first shounen-ai/yaoi pairing I ever came across and it still hasn't let me go _

Anyway, I really like this fic, and I thought it really deserved a review. Like you said, there can NEVER be enough Taito in this world :p

Was this a oneshot? *hopes not*

*swoons* ah that's a perfect story... *dreamy eyes* yes, so sexy.. One word. Awesome. You're great!

Oh! Make more, this was adorable! Taito rules! Taito all the way!

Tai and Yamma are cool. My favorate characters (next to Kari). Love how you (almost) made them in character, saying things they would really say.

"At this particular moment in time, the bed sat quietly in its corner " no comma

"There was a random sock on the floor," random sounds a little strange here.

"Snatches of conversation, at first muffled by the wooden walls, suddenly burst into the room and two bags were suddenly hurled through the door, skidding across the floor and sliding under the desk." kind of run on. You might want to split this into two sentances.

"A soccer ball rolled idly across the room coming to a standstill" not sure idly is the right word. If someone had rolled it gently then it is but the way they are coming into the room... and also a comma between room and coming

"tugging at the buttons with his hand half way up the sleeve and the collar partway over his head." HAHAHAHAHA I'VE DONE THIS

"He paused for a second to take stock of situation he'd got himself into" stock of [the] situation he'd [gotten] Though I think you can leave it "got" but I'm not sure.

"himself into, before following Yamato as he moved back out to the lounge room." I think you can take out the comma here

"The voices continued and there was sounds of a brief tussle before" "was sounds" looks awkward but I'm not sure if it's right or not. I think it would be "were sounds" but I'm not sure that's any better.

"Yamato slammed the frame with his fist angrily" Yamato [angrily] slammed the frame with his fist ? the sentence that is in is also very long you may want to split it into two sentences

" digging his nose into the blanket and scrinching it up in his fists." makes it sound like he's scrinching his nose up in his fists. Mebbe "scrinching the material" or something. Is it flannel? It is linen?

"He slid an arm underneath his belly and the other under his chest as dropped his chin over his shoulder to mutter in his ear." consider changing the first "his" to a "yamato's" because there are far too many he's and his's *sigh* That's the only real problem with writing yaoi... gotta keep all the he's and him's and his's straight (which is hard to do since it's NOT!)

"Yamato twitched his back in a lame attempt to make Taichi get off." *mind drops right to gutter and she giggles*

"only to find his nose buffeted by Taichi breath which wasn't exactly the greatest thing at this time in the afternoon." [Taichi's] breath[,]

"He made no further efforts to remove the body pressing him into the covers though and instead lay there basking in the warmth of his living blanket." remove the "though" and consider putting the "instead" at the end of the sentence

ChildLoki: "“Why ‘Chi?

I liked this, it was interesting.

This isnt the whole story, is it.

Because there is so many questions I want an answer. Example; Who were talking and what they were talking to make Yama so upset? Are Yama and Tai already pair?...etc.

Please be kind and continue.

PS. I like those flags!

... All right. I salute you. Because you rock. This is immensely well-written, and lacks all of the irritating flaws usually present in Digimon fanfiction (Character A: "I love you!" Character B: "... Buh?" Character A: "... *angst*" Character B: "... Wait... you! I love!" Character A: "YEY! *hump*"). There are about a billion other things I could say to praise you and this insanely charming little ficlet, but it's... like... late, and I should be in bed. But I'm not. ... And I have the strangest feeling I'm rambling, so... here. Take a gold star. And a cookie. *favorites list!*

Nice start! I think the way you described Tai's reaction Yamato was nicely done. Please write more.

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DreamWeaver

Haha, hopefully I AM the first reviewer. You molded and grew this story much more than I ever could have. ::bursts into tears:: I'm so proud of you.

::blows nose on Taito flag, stares in disgust, and pulls out another one::

::hands Taito plushie to Mazza::