Sam*ron: Aww man, that was good.

Vegeta: No it wasn't! I am NOT that weak.

Sam*ron: *Sigh* You would be if all that stuff happened to you. And you know you would.

Vegeta: No, I meant weak as in wanting a human.

Sam*ron: Vegeta, that's your wife.

Vegeta: So what, she isn't my wife in this stupid block of words.

Sam*ron: ... You mean story?

Vegeta: Whatever woman, shut your mouth.

Sam*ron: *Sigh* Just tell her to update, please. Cause I could sure use another chapter. :)

Vegeta: *Glares evily* Fine... *Grinds teeth* P-pl...

Sam*ron: Please...

Vegeta: I know bitch!

Sam*ron: Then say it!!

Vegeta: P-please... update your damn story! This woman is bugging the hell out of me. *Glares*

Sam*ron: Good boy. :)

I really love this story! Please don't give up on it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hey, how about more updates...sooner! I love this, well done. Can't wait for the next chap!

Continue your "machina" story PLLEASESE, but think about making vegeta a little more cold and LESS sensitive. Its the only way-lol.

Great1
Another Chapter pLease!
Thanks!

wow. plz, hurry and update, this is an amazing story. :)

its good, keep going.

please get more chapters up soon. i love the story, one of he best ever.

MEOW! I really loved this, please, please, please update this story. Im dying here!

It seems to be another GREAT story, Kichi! More chapters, please.
[ ]´s, Bulma

A nice beginning to a story that looks definitely promising! The protagonists are very well depicted and the mood's set.
I'm looking forward to read more

Wow! that was very good! very orginal! excellent very well wrote and new and orginal plot! please continue! very long chapter too! yay! KEEP GOING! UPDATE SOON ^_^

-Moonlight152

Moonlight152@aol.com

Good job! Keep it up! I thought it was very interesting and entertaining. Cant wait to see what happens next.

Wow! This chapter was super! Loved every bit of it!
Can't wait for the next one! ^^
keep it up! ^^