 SilentHypoCrit 2009-07-07 . chapter 4Nice, nice story. Sadly not finished. Wonder how in all these years I did miss this one even though it has been in discontinuity for 5 years.
Can only say I enjoyed reading. And did not mind the steamy parts one bit. (almos which there were some place with the lemon scenes X_X).
Since it has been so long it is probably futile to hope for a next chapter, but one never knows. |
 moritynz 2008-08-30 . chapter 4Oh god I hope you revive this story, it is awesome |
 masaki yang yi1 2008-04-29 . chapter 4Not bad but is this what you want,a Ranma/Nabiki match up?
And what sort of crossover are you planing on doing?
as for Ranma being smarter thain the cannon,it's not that hard of a hurdle to cross after all he is unequeled when it come's to martial art's. Please write more chapter's to this. |
 Sdarian 2007-10-22 . chapter 4This is a really good story so far. I just hope you come back and write more on it. Good luck! |
 James Birdsong 2007-06-26 . chapter 4 Whatever. You write good. |
 James Birdsong 2007-06-26 . chapter 3 Do continue. |
 James Birdsong 2007-06-26 . chapter 2 Neato |
 James Birdsong 2007-06-26 . chapter 1 Nice |
 Hommit 2007-06-13 . chapter 4That's great! please more. )) |
 Blackdex 2007-03-18 . chapter 4You missed several kinds of magic in your descriptions, but I am assuming you were just trying to keep it simple. I have nothing else to say. Ciao |
 armanstay 2006-12-12 . chapter 4Pretty interesting relationship in my opinion. I like the story too, though. |
 Sired 2006-04-30 . chapter 4WHY THE HECK HAVE YOU NOT CONTINUED THIS! ITS A GREAT ORGINAL STORY! I just happen to come by it and read it and now i want more but when i check the last time it was updated was in 2004! come on man you gotta continue it or if you dont have any ideas then rewrite it! but dont just let it sit there man... |
 Servent Seras 2006-02-03 . chapter 4Awesome |
 Jetflash 2006-01-08 . chapter 4Is there going to be a next time? I hope to see more of this. I think you have done a good job of showing how Ranma (who is used to fighting, but not death) and especially Nabiki (not used to either) would react to something like this. Is this after Saffron? Good luck with continued writing. |
 griffenvamp 2005-12-09 . chapter 4 so when's the update comming? |