Kind of creepy but still pretty good nonetheless!

Not sure if I understood this fic. Well written, tho.

this is good. weird and creepy but good. i like reading it because it was different.

okay, this may sound weird but i reeeeeeaally like it, even though i am having a freakin hard time understanding it. i've been rereading this for the past ten minutes and still!

you. are. awesome. :) keep up the good work! :D \m/

but if you don't mind... can you please explain this to me? anyone? :(

He frightens me. Kudos.

That was really good :) Keep it up!

Amazingly written. I would've never considered Kagome being Naraku's daughter but I suppose she and Onigumo AND Naraku all bear a resemblance.

At first, I was a bit confused :) But then I got it. I really like how Naraku plans stuff XD

I really, I just have no words. At all. This was absolutely beautiful!

Great job! :D

Fantastic.

-sigh-

I think it is time to favorite author you, lol. I really liked that. angst is my BFF, and you do her lots of good. ;)

That's so pretty. The first thing I noticed was you incorporated numbers true to your theme. I don't get it all that much. It reminded me of pedophilia and lingering yearnings for Kikyou a little bit, but I probably should read this again. Sum is really, really good! _

I should have expected no less. You realize how talented a writer you are, right? If you don't, you're in sore need of someone giving you a whap upside the head. As for your one-shot; god, it doesn't get any more lovely than this. I angst and despair and hopelessness for some reason. It makes me realize my own humanity, I suppose. And Naraku is a perfect contrast. Love the number theme, by the way. And the subtle clues. It makes me think, which is always good (except if I haven't had a vacation).

wait what? was she his daughter?

Very original. I love the numbers. Naraku is very meticulous and seems like one who would count everything. Sometimes he seems even a little OCD.

One question. When you say "Ten years, seven months, and twenty-six days after she was made flesh of his flesh, blood of his blood, he realizes he's made a mistake." Are you implying that Kagome is Naraku's daughter?