What a wonderful interpretation of "wandering". I have nothing else to say - this is short, sweet and perfect. I adore, adore, adore Maglor. I need to (try and) write a fic about him one day.

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You managed to beautifully describe the atmosphere in only a few wors. I really liked this one!

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Navaer Lalaith

For such a short work, the haunting and tragic feeling is so strong I want to cry. "perhaps to somewhere that I shall never find." i love it. the brevity adds to the piece, for it somehow appeals to the imagery of Maglor wandering upon the shore. it's beautifully tragic. i love it. adding to my fav stories.

I love this. It's short, concise, and effective. Two thumbs up!