 StormyFlame 2006-11-08 . chapter 1Wow dudette it was brilliant :3 is there gonna be another chapter? I hope so :D lol. Well it was a great fic and cute at the same time ;) and the whole pervy Kai thing at the beginning was all too funny lol! Please update soon if there is another chapter :D ~SF~ |
 YaoiYaoiYeah 2005-12-07 . chapter 1This fic is so fun and so sweet!
I love the ending, it melts my heart!
great fic! |
 Kai Hiwatari II 2005-11-11 . chapter 1good pairing! pleze update soon. can't wait 2 see how this ends! |
 Agangel 2005-09-21 . chapter 1very nice. i like Takara... she's fun, i read in you profille that you hate Ray\Mariah pairing, i think we should open unti-Mariah club!! ^+^ wanna??
anyway i have a fic about Ray\OC and Kai\OC, i think you might like it... the first chapters are bad but i'll repair them in a month, but the others chapters are good! you should check it out!
(And think about the anti-Mariah club... -^_*- |
 Kiina 2005-03-09 . chapter 1Yay Cool! |
 Moonlight Stalker 2004-10-12 . chapter 1Aww so sweet! Stoopid kai...not wanting to show his feelings tut tut, owel! he got there in the end! keep on write! |
 cute-fairygurl 2004-09-15 . chapter 1hey...
Keep it up, its great and excellent, totally cool! wanna read the update one!
see ya
cute_fairygurl |
 moon-punk22 2004-09-10 . chapter 1ty muat have really truted kai with his sister my brother wont even consider leaving me in the same room with boyz |
 Flamable-Devil 2004-09-07 . chapter 1hey gal good story! i liked it^^
Jen |