That was so cute, you did that peom nicely. You really have a talent in poetry. You caught onto his feelings and it seemed so CUTE I loved it. It was so sweet.

Kitty Kat Kitty Kit aka Chaotic -Kinky- Kitty also known as Nerf-chan

stupidley lame. but nice try...not

I love this! It is well written and the rhymes are well placed and not trite. :) Great job. I think you've captured it brilliantly, perfectly. And it made me go, "Aw!" :D

Wow! Inspirational! You're *very* good at writing poetry no matter what you think. However the only thing I would change is the title. It's a tad too corny for such a magnificent poem.

"The punches, the spitballs, the unforgiving glares-But underneath all that, he still can't help but stare" and "That despite her seemingly cruel exterior-Lurks a young woman that feels inferior" those are my fav lines _ I really enjoyed this, you have real talent! Keep it up! Take care, *Silver Kitten*

I thought it was a very accurate portrayal of how he must really feel about her. Dead on, and not bad in the least! Give yourself some credit, kiddo! Good job!

I have seen this poem and liked inmediatly. Im not a native english speaker and so the english poetry is difficult for me to assimilate, but I like the poems and I think is a great way of fanfiction.

Please excuse my bad english.

Greetings ShanniC!

WOW! Another brilliant poem, it shows the mind of a certain football-head quite well!

You are definately someone who belongs on my favorates list!

Keep Writing!

May The Force Be With You! Your Pal, DarthRoden (aka Carl)