This story is really good, I keep coming back to see if you finished the story or added another chapter. I hope you do finish this story sometime.

Hi. Cool! Plz update more frequently.

Hi all...responding in here just to keep you informed. I know you're all waiting for more chapters...and not to sound like a broken record (Or CD or downloaded music file..whatever) but I'm sorry that it's taking so long. I haven't forgotten about this story...been really busy of late. Other stories get attention sometimes...and this one will also. Sorry, sorry, sorry...did I mention I'm sorry? Keep the faith ya'll...more chapters will come soon.

Update, please!

Hi. Awesome chapter! I'd like to see the dinobots and other combiners soon!

Great story so far. i hope we will see the rescure attempt a succsess. I like the spin on the old generation gives it a more real feeling and i like the updates on the transformations. Keep up the great work

It's writing like this that encourages me and other authors to write better. You heard this a lot but, sure, your older and you have more experience in writing. I'm serious, I can hardly find any errors in here, you have great detail, you even made me think that this is the way that Hasbro should've gone when Project N came into the picture! The new Transformers movie coming out in 2007 should have you as the script or the story writer. I'll all saying is, go for being an author or movie writer. Trust me, you really have the skills to do it.

Cliffjumper as cliffhanger. Hmm. That was a fairly stupid stunt. Good thing the 'Cons were too distracted to see him. Please update again soon!

So that's what the Heart of Cybertron is. Thanks for clarifying that for me. The action is heating up again. Please update again soon!

A great chapter. C'mon, Skyfire, snap out of it! Please update again soon!

Me no like Megatron. Please swat him. Hard. Hopefully after seeing all that Skyfire will come to his senses. Please update again soon!

Interesting

Skyfire still has a few wires crossed. I hope that soon he comes to his senses. Please update again soon!

Wow. This story is great! I hope Skyfire comes to his senses soon. Did you know that chapters 14 and 15 are the same? You posted it twice. Please update again soon!

Ah yeah U updated! ^_^ luv how skyfire is so IC..heh he's such a sucker XD...CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE!! ^^