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| smiles 2008-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abusethank for deciding to continue this. i want more and it better be soon, so no pressure. giggle. |
| prince candy 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseWOW. I usually don't read Gravitation fics, but this is awesome! |
| Silvea 2007-04-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseTHAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL. I think I orgasmed. Now YOU tell ME, Ryu, was that perverse? I don't think so. It was beautiful and well-written. Ryuichi was in-character while not being too goofy for the storyline. Not to mention I adore this pairing. ^_^ -silvea- |
| Reina-183 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseOMG! This is absolutely amazing! You've written Ryuichi so well! I can't decide whether to love you or to hate you. Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| VampireRiddler 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseWow! Thats cool! Love it! Plz do write more! plz! I have been a fan for 3 years and I know everything there is to know! even though I broke and can't read the rest of the seires! |
| Meeksu 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseI love it! Your writing is beautiful =D I see it was last updated in 2004, though =( I think...I may be reading it wrong, it's 1am e.e But, I would really, really love to see an update!! If that's possible? =3 Anywhos, I'm off to sleep |D -wave- |
| Quack says the duck 2006-06-07 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was just so good. I love the whole Willy Wonka-ness of it all, that's such a great story and you've captured it in Ryuichi so well! Try to update if you can - I'd love to read more! I never thought of Ryu and Hiro before, but it's kind of cute! |
| GreenEyedFloozy-BackInBusin... 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseAww! I was so surprised that it's Hero, but Ryuichi is awesome in this fic it's totally believable! |
| Yoko-sempai 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseLove it! I know that this is highly unlikely, but can you please update this? I really really like it! It has Sakuma-san and Hiro-kun in it! If you update, I'll give you tons of sparkly Ryu pics! *chibi eyes* Pwease? |
| Oni-Baka 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuse*shudders* Wow. This is definitely the best writing I've ever written for Ryuichi. Amazing figurative language stuffs...next chapter? I've done my part by reviewing, ne? |
| CosmicEssence 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseYour use of metaphors and comparisons, as well as your grammer, language and english in general is absolutely astounding! The words convey the exact feeling that the scene calls for whether it be cutesy sweetness with the bunny or the whole obsession with sweets or whether its Ryuichi's longing for something he obviously daren't ask for. Characters so far are good and you hooked my interest from beginning to end non-stop. It is too bad you haven't touched this in so long. |
| princessares 2005-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI cannot wait till you find the right mood and inspiration to continue this piece. Particularly with the reference to Willy Wonka, it is beginning to look a lot deeper and interesting, beyond the realm of a simple 'un-cannon pairing story'. |
| Reioko 2005-08-31 ch 1, | abuseSuper great! Please hurry and up-date! You left me dying for more! |
| Sakuma Sonnet 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abusewould you ever ever EVER finish this up? |
| Suguru Fujisaki 2005-08-16 ch 1, | abuseOkay, as a very obsessed Gravi fangirl, I understand all of this, and I completely love it. Write more, please. I like your style. |