just so you know, you have WAY TOO MANY grammer and spelling mistakes. you say "i'd get you turner" when it should be "i'll get you turner". i'd means i would. i'll means i will, and therefore fits much better. awesome story though!

ok so i've been reading for half an hour or so read the rest tomorrow

that was along one

ok so i couldn't go to bed wondering what was going to happen next so i may aswell read and R&R the rest.

good night

ok i'll review the rest tomorrow i'm geting tired.

ok i thought i'd review every chapter you obviously love writing fan fiction.

great

he he

Cool

wow you made a sequal.

Hey man, what's up? I just got done reading your AUG/FOP crossovers and I liked them both. As the old saying goes, "you did a bang up job." It made me laugh in some parts and the action reminded me of all those action shows I see on TV. Anyway great job with both stories and update soon on "True Love". Later.