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Chakat Scirocco
2007-08-04 . chapter 4
Yes, please let us see the Kimahri chapter!
Airemir
2007-07-24 . chapter 4
This is so cool!

Wakka, Lulu, Yuna, Tidus, Auron, Rikku and Kimahri is in OUR world! Cool!

Wait, what will happen to Kimahri in our world? And what will happen to Yuna? Will she be put in Sickkids Hospital, in Crisis and Eating Disorder unit? I'm in there too. Wait, do you live in Canada? Cause if you don't, never mind what I said.

COOL COOL COOL!
vandevere
2007-07-24 . chapter 1
This is an interesting one...

The Poor Guardians are having a rough time of it...

I wonder how Kimahri and Tidus are. Especially , I wonder what Gaea is going to do about Kimahri... He's not even Human; he's a Ronso, and I wonder what Gaea's going to have to do to make him fit in...

Vandevere
ArcaneWeapon
2005-02-01 . chapter 3
Very interesting!! My first AU fic and I like it a lot! Keep the chapters coming, I wanna see how this ends up!
fadedjae
2004-12-17 . chapter 1
The idea is novel and fascinating and your writing is amazing. Great story! Please continue!
Spira's Bard
2004-12-08 . chapter 3
This story is truly fun to read! I love how you've 'translated' the characters, yet kept them true to themselves! Good job!
Tactix
2004-11-28 . chapter 3
wow u r a great fic author i love ur work keep it up
lights-parade
2004-11-18 . chapter 3
I'm sure I reviewed this yesterday but it won't seem to appear. Anyway, I really like this idea and it is written very nicely. Update soon ^_^
Wagga the Newt Boy (Rob)
2004-11-18 . chapter 3
I like it very much... You have the two major points of Wakka's persona down beautifully: Religious Zealot and fearful of Machines (in this case cars).
My favorite bit of this section, though, is the role reversal between Wakka and Lulu. Whereas Wakka wouldn't let go of Chappu's death, here he is the first to deal with it and move on. Lulu, on the otherhand, much to the same effect, is still dealing with the alternate's death. It's a nice touch and adds to the parallel dimension feeling of the story.
Again, a bravisimo is sent your way. One more accomplishment of this type and I see a bravisissimo in your future ^.^ .
Rhianna-Aurora
2004-11-16 . chapter 3
I like this chapter! It's very good, and Wakka is PERFECT! Listening to sermons in the car -- yup, that's him all right! You are so dead-on with your characters! Keep up the good work! XD Looking forward for the next chapter! XD
mandyfanforevr
2004-11-16 . chapter 3
Very interesting idea. I like it a lot so far.. update soon!
wow
2004-11-16 . chapter 3
WOW UR ALIVE!!

great chap
Everyone's Favorite Deadbeat, Rob.
2004-11-14 . chapter 2
Very impressive. One finds it hard to believe that this could be written by someone of our age, and I am most impressed by this work. Gripping and descriptive, and, though alternate, true to the air and solidity of the FFX feeling.

Bavisimo, hun, and I hope to see more chapters soon!
Furycutter
2004-09-17 . chapter 1
Am likeing v v much & can't wait for the next chapter.
Spira's Bard
2004-09-12 . chapter 2
I'm so impressed! You have the beginnings of a facinating story! Please don't keep us hanging! I want to hear more!
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