Nice writing... but I agree with some of the others here, I was rooting for 'ol Vic...

I really enjoyed the story. I hope to read, more of your stories in the future.

Great story! (Don't I say that about all your stuff? Oh well.) Anyway, I really liked the ending, very nice quote by Betsy. The description of the battle was really cool, and I liked Betsy's conversation with Rahne, for some reason. Nice work!

I am not a Besty fan but wow, this was good. I love seeing Creed get bested by a mere (or not so mere) woman. The home team scores!

Aaaawwww... Poor Vic. Good story though really liked it :d

Not much Ssabretooth storys out there Thanks for adding another one to the llist :)

Very stange, but good.

good story. very good. keep writing.

Very well written. And an interesting look at the other side of the fence, as it were! Good job, good writing, excellent imagery... but... I dunno. I was rooting for Sabretooth.