i really like it:)

good job!

This was a great story. I especially liked Frank's reaction to the gang barging in. Excellent.

I loved this story already I hope you update really soon as i cant wait to see what happens. I love the movie and frank is my favourite Character. Its really well written, and the plot and story line is great i cant wait to read more i hope you update soon and on a regular basis after that cause i cant wait to see wait to see what happens

hey i loved the movie so i figured i would check out this story... i loved it ;)

sam

Its a brilliant story, that could become so much. Please update, or make the whole story.

Add more add more add more. Well is that enough to convice you to add to this story? It's terrific and I think Frank(my favorite character) deserves some love just like Jesse and Cole.

OMG, keep going, don't stop now.

Perhaps it would be good for the gang to "hit the road" and keep the simmering attraction going between them.

But they are not to consumate their relationship for another 5-10 episodes.

Very nice! You mentioned how this was an excerpt of a full story you had written? Would there be any way that I could read that story, because I really like the way this one is going. It's very interesting.

I don't see anything that you would want to change in this chapter, though.

-K

I think what you had have going, it would be a shame not to continue. I would like to read more!

Ok this story has been up for awhile, but i thought i should give it a shot. Please write another chapter!

i liked it so um please write more ok.

that was a great story. this is my first review for american outlaws. i love frank so don't leave the story hanging! update soon and keep up the good work.

oh gods that was beautiful...hahahaha!

"Next time I'll lock and barricade the door."

ROFLMAO

hey i really like this are you going to keep writing?

I really like the story. I hope you have a second chapter in mind. :)