I was hoping for a good story but that one is to rushed and dammed to uberwillow but it was a good idea.

Thanks to everyone for reviewing. I wanted to write more and put in more dialogue, but I had a deadline for this story and virus trouble cut down on my writing time. I do intend to revise and expand this story though. To Bobby: I had forgotten about Angel asking for help about Fred. Willow has some blind spots in her psyche and others are bound to have different viewpoints about guilt. But she has alot of talents and can accomplish much if she prepares, like she does in this story. I want to establish that some magic is based on Ancient tech not vice-versa.

I think it has great potential, but needs some revising. You may want to put more dialog in, it makes the story more intersting, also the story goes on, but nothing really happens, you may want to work on your plot. I think this is great but some background info on the direct experiences would be nice, not just remembered stuff. Anyway, keep working at it, I'll be looking for an update.

Because they're gonig to go in heavy-handed, like they do in every other story. They're going to go in all-knowing.

Please.

The Ancients may be an enlightened species, but the attempt at explaining their scientific prowess as mystic in origin was real thin. Similarly, the attempt at explaining Willow's magic as being the Ancient's gene was real thin too.

You need more dialogue, more detail, more plot. The Willow-is-automatically-an-expert thing has been done to death so many times it's not even funny anymore.

With respect, it doesn't sound like she feels guilty at all; it sounds like she blames Angel because they cut her off.

If I recall correctly, Angel did go to them for help, when Fred's soul was consumed in the fire of Illyria's resurrection, but they refused to help. Fred's fate is not entirely Angel's fault, and Willow, Giles, and Xander should feel responsible. Instead they shift the blame, how like the irresponsible children they are.

This is a very good story so far please post more soon!!

It's good stuff. Sometimes it's so coincidental that it's ridiculous though. I'll take another serving please.

good cahpter, awaits the next, byes

You have an interesting beginning to what looks like it is going to be a very interesting story. I look forward to seeing how you are going to develop it.

More please! There are too few good SG-1 crossovers out there and this looks to be an interesting beginning.