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| winternightBliSs 2006-07-10 ch 4, | abuseOh my God. That just blew me away. I've never really been too keen on FF guys lovin each other but that- that was just BEAUTIFUL. S'pose your tired of hearin it, but WOW. Most of the time in fics the characters kinda keep their feelings to themselves- you read about their emotions and you're like 'aw, poor him' but in this fic you can actually feel them, they're so strong. You made me cry at the end! That was just so sad n angsty.. I really wanted them to just drop their swords and get back in love. Oh god, it was so well-written- and the fact that you added Aeris in just added to the heartwrenching-ness. ** +favs ** This is one of the best stories -not only out of the male pairings- but the WHOLE FF fanstuffs that I've read. Go You! *wipes tears* ~winternight x |
| The Slice 2006-06-03 ch 4, | abuseOh, good heavens, but that simply beautiful. I loved it, and cried over it, and mourned for them, so hard. Breathtaking. |
| OmniStrife 2006-03-25 ch 4, | abuseThis is beautiful. Heart-breaking and beautiful. There's really no other way to describe it. Just beautiful. |
| escelphius 2005-12-11 ch 4, | abuseBeautiful. Simply and absolutely beautiful (X3)! You added a whole new dimension to FFVII's story, made it possible for a shounen-ai side to it! I didn't thought the death of Aeris nor the ending sad, but after reading your fic, I changed my mind. Oh, you turned me into mush (XD)! |
| firedraygon 2005-09-17 ch 4, | abuseI love how we finally get to see Cloud's perspective in the last chapter. ^^ Wonderful work. I really enjoyed this fic. The contradictions from Sephiroth and the way he'd reference things from the future -- I like the effect it created. Please write more soon! ~firedraygon97 |
| Empress-Eerian-Sadow 2005-05-25 ch 4, | abusewow. that was seriously intense. i loved it. |
| KiraDN 2005-01-07 ch 4, | abuse*sniff sniff* Wow... That's so... angsty. Man... Oh my god, this is so good. Well written and... angsty. *cries* OMFG I luv this! |
| Clorith 2005-01-03 ch 4, | abuse*sniffle* Okay, this is so sad... I wonder how AC will end. I'm hoping against hope that Cloud dies, call me cruel if you want. I think it's for the best, and perhaps only then, that moment before he dies, will he be happy. Well, a girl can hope. |
| Clorith 2005-01-03 ch 3, | abuse*applaudes* This was a really well-written chapter. It's so sad, especially the part where Sephiroth seemed to regret killing her, albeit momentarily. Love your perspective on the whole thing. ^__^ |
| serain 2004-11-10 ch 4, | abuseWow. I love strong endings. "What do you miss most?" "Him." Perfect. I love this story and shall worship it forever and ever. 'just the two of them on this unceremonious altar' was a great line too. I think I'm just werid, but I thought it was cute for sephiroth to just die when cloud said he loved her more. In my mind, Cloud commits suicide. Dunno why. This was a great read. Sad it's over now ;_; I'll look forward to other stories of yours. ~Nuitari |
| serain 2004-11-05 ch 3, | abuseMe again! Great chapter. Love the description and how you portray Sephiroth's hate/love. I usually don't leave reviews for every single chapter, but you have some serious talent. :) Keep on writing. I need that next chapter. Can I hope for a powerful resolution? |
| serain 2004-11-02 ch 2, | abusethis is great! I can't wait for the third part. Update it soon, because I'll be waiting! 'but I remembered you' that line. awesome. am i first reviewer for this chapter? |
| Selphiebunny 2004-11-01 ch 1, | abuseThis isn't a one shot right? RIGHT, please continue it, I absolutley love this story and it's possibly my fifth time re-reading it. |
| jen0va99 2004-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI don't usually leave reviews, but I just had to this time. Oh man, this story is gorgeous. The tone, words, feelings, everything. And it's in-character! Awesome. Keep it up XD The only thing wrong that I could see was the misspelling of Nibelheim (simple mistake, I know. I'm just a total name **, sorry XD), but other than that... really, wonderful. I can't wait to read more. |
| labrat-seph 2004-09-08 ch 1, | abuseWow so much emotion. I really like the way that you actually have Seph "feel". Not many peope are kind enought to give him feelings. I am a Seph lover and I do hope you continue the story from this point of view. Only one other person has given him the emotion that you have given him. Although in the other story it took him a while to feel. The only exception was Aeris. |