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harry potter lover 2/9/11 . chapter 10
i love this story

you are a great writer you shoulod try writing your own stuff as well i think you have a great imagination keep it up x
ireadfanfic 4/9/10 . chapter 2
Nice :) maybe put a borderline so that ppl are not confused that this is a flashback.
ireadfanfic 4/9/10 . chapter 1
This is beautifully written actually, though I must admit I was kinda confused on what's going on. I will be very helpful if some punctuations are used for inner self conversations (for example: 'Typical, isn't it', she muttered to herself as she walked on.)

Btw the summary was very interesting and the disclaimer was written professionally xD
Edelin 7/12/07 . chapter 20
Very nice story Do you have any relationship with Greece or you just found the words in a dictionary?
witchychick1030 7/19/06 . chapter 20
OMG this story should have like 10 or more reviews it was awesome! Even though I had a headache I read it,it was THAT good lol!
manolito 7/18/05 . chapter 20
It is a great story... very well written! You have a great talent. I am not a fan of H and H but I still kept on reading until the end. Again, wonderful story!
diesoz 12/9/04 . chapter 20
This is (was, whatever) an awesom story! I can't wait to get started on the sequel! Again you are a most amazing writer!
diesoz 12/8/04 . chapter 18
Once again prove your skilss as a wonderful writer! I hate H&H with a passion, but I knew it was coming, I knew that they would get together by the end fo the chapter, but I couldn't stop reading. Even at the shrieking shack, I knew it was coming it was almost here and I couldn't stop reading! I am so going to read like everything you've written. And I know I've said it before and I'll say it again H&H is wrong and I love your writing!
diesoz 12/7/04 . chapter 15
I'm still not big on the whole "Lilly isn't really dead" thing. I guess I'll see how it plays out in your story. I do like your creativeness. I think it is still a great story. Just let James RIP.
diesoz 12/7/04 . chapter 12
OHMIGOSH! I absolutely love this chapter. It was so great that I had to wait to review b/c i had to go on to the next chapter. I was actually so into this story that the girl sitting next to me started giving me funny looks b/c I was muttering things under my breath. In my head I actually compared you to J.K. Rowling. Again, this chapter is amazing I love it. Love it, love it, love it!
diesoz 12/7/04 . chapter 11
oo, oo! Yay! Estella's here! Have I mentioned that I love your story?
diesoz 12/6/04 . chapter 6
Your story is awesome. I can't seem to stop reading it. I have to go to work now or I wouldn't stop and review. I've been told Hermione as Voldemort's daughter isn't original, but I think the story is wonderful. I know the story's finished, but don't let Harry and Hermione get together. Just say no to H&H!
Jack Robinson 6/24/04 . chapter 8
hehe... loved this chapter! I like the Mr Collins and Lady Bracknell references! PS Thanks for reviewing my lowly story! _
Jack Robinson 6/14/04 . chapter 5
Ooh.. .the plot thickens... It's a good idea, even if it doesn't work post Oop. I was also very happy to find for the first time, a Pippa in a fanfiction! That's my name! Yay! Thanks.
Jack Robinson 6/7/04 . chapter 1
Wow! This story has drawn me in straight away! I really should be revising for my exams...but I love this story! I must keep reading! That's such a good idea...the whole interacting with each other while dreaming and everything.
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