Seriously, "patience and endurance in a place that's unsuitable for you. To care and love others as if it were your own."

That's the best Remus can come up with? Why should Harry have "patience and endurance" for those who place him in such a place; what need for compassion in hell?

seriously...master hary j poter. That is a terrible anagram and really messes up the flow of the story

hey great chapter

I love this story so much its the the third time i'm reading it and it's sequel.

"I ended up spending 10 miserable years at my relatives, with those Mudbloods"

A mudblood is a witch or wizard thats parents are muggles. The dursleys are just muggles. Just a small point. Great story so far by the way!

I find it hard to understand Remus' complete submersion into evil. I suppose it is logical. Just that it started off unclearly, the explanation wasn't too clear.

Otherwise, part for a few readability issues, this is a good story, with a very interesting plot.

Your anagram was rediculous. It totally put me off reading this story.

Well..

That was a twist (and an anagram) that I didn't see coming.

Brilliant chapter.

Ok! I didn't get past chapter 6. Why? So many spell errors(I'm french! I shouldn't even see those!) plus you are not even taking time to read your chapter before posting...CODRIC! Wtf is that? And you didn't just make it one time, but at least thrice. Second: if you want to do an AU plz keep some logic with the books, at least. C'mon Harry transforming during the night.

Philosopher's Stone - Night

Chamber of Secret(spider and forest part) - at night

Prisonner of Azkaban- FULL MOON!

Goblet of Fire(Voldemort rebirth) - Night

C'mon, try to make at least something look logical. Plus, Harry doing the killing curse when he barely manage to do the Cruciatus minutes ago?

And please try to make dialogues understandable! You know like skiping a line between each answer! We get lost trying to know who is telling what!

That was my last word,

Ghostly Author

Aside from a million spelling errors, you made at least one major plot error in your story, unless... I missed something somewhere. The plot error is...

Earlier you killed off Alaster Moody by torture, but during the time when Harry is being escorted to his trial, one of the people escorting Harry to the ministry is none other than Alaster Moody. How is he still alive? You make many references to him being killed off so how can you make such a plot error as to suddenly have him alive?

Also, It would be nice if you corrected the enormous number of spelling errors like CODRICKS Hollow, should be GODRICKS Hollow. You know, there is a web site called the HP Lexicon that has all the information on HP you could ever need including the correct spelling of the names and places JKR refers to. I will include the URL but you will have to adjust it after you coppy and paste it.

http:(2/forward slashes here)(3 w here).

I hope this helps you make less spelling errors in the future.

As for your story. Well it is strange to say the least. Abit hard to follow and a bit confusing. Out of a possible 5 stars I give 2 1/2 stars (**)

Steve

well this was bloody fantastic! dark Harry?... yea i have read dark Harry fic's but this is ultimate darknes, but i like is... just it is so terribly sad that Siriuss is the only one with some sense! :) LOVE SIRIUSS! :)) and remus? he too is great, but in this story- in one word- MONSTER! although in past 5 years (not only Harry become more human, but himself too)! and Severus... oh he is so awesom! perfect- dark/light- he is outstanding! well i must now start readind the sequel... i hope it won't dissapoint me..

:))

Check your spelling! "Codrics Hallow?" how could you miss that?

admiring whistle

wow...

if you write an AU story, pls try to make it possible.

lets see, Harry transforming every night...lol.

do you real think that the Dursleys wouldn't kill him if they see that? and what's about his years at Hogwarts? astronomie at midnight, sneaking around at night with his friends.

wasn't the Stone at night, also the CoS, what's about the Prisoner (full moon you remember), detentions with Umbridge late at night, and the CoM also playing at night.

oh, and don't forget fighting Dumbledore after he proved that he can't cast an unforgivable.

my my, you authors are running low on ideas how to send Harry to Azkaban and than let him wreck havoc.