well done, and no, the italics aren't bothering me at all, i'm perfectly fine with them. Keep going!!

Excellent fic, really original and all, hope you update :)

still an interesting story, Jane. You've kept my interest in this type, even though it isn't my regular style.

This was a very powerful chapter, especially how Harry's struggling to do what he believes/knows he has to do, yet at the same time he's still young, and somehow, the last few lines where Ginny was holding Harry just seemed so sad, adn reminded me so much of season one in Buffy the vampire slayer where she finds out she's going to die when she fights the Master.

Two questions: would this be a HarryGinny? or would Harry die in the end?

Just curious.

Anyway, turning better. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Wow, great chapter.

I'm dying here. Just who is he planning on killing off? Other than the curiousity of that, I'm loving your story. Very well done. The jumping around tends to be disorienting sometimes, but I manage to keep up with it.

Until you update again. We'll be waiting.
Sincerely,
Michelle W.

This is very good...very possible. Nice piece of angst! All the time when Harry was pushing Ron and Hermione away, a sentence came in my head...[I dont want sidekicks who can't protect themselves, let alone kill others]...dunno, my head is weird. Anyway, update soon please! I want to read more!!

[The only way I can defeat the Dark Lord is to become a Dark Lord myself...]

kuroneko89

I really like it. You're cliff hanger is very well put. But, the italisis of the words makes them slightly more difficult to read.

good chapter. good sequencing between internal and "real" action. i can't wait to see where this goes.

I loved this line for some reason, it just seemed so . . . perfect: "Neither boy came close to liking the other, but somewhere during that night spent in the Forbidden Forest, they'd stumbled upon a mutual respect." Keep up the great work, I'm looking forward to the next chp.

I'm pretty sure Dumbledore stated at the end of the book somewhere that the Mirror had been moved to a new owner, or was going to be, when he and Harry were both in the room gazing at it. At least that's what i remember.
That was very good, very deep and...full of tension. Can't wait to hear more!

like i'v already said, this fic is great!
On the part about the mirror. I'd say it was still in the dungeon where the Philosopher's Stone was. Just a guess tho.
cant w8 4 da upd8
craig

this isreally good. i'm goin to read the next 2 chapters when i'v finished my 2nd chapter.
keep up the good work!
craig

please continue i like it , and sorry but i don`t know what happen to the mirror oOó

Interesting idea. You've done a very good job with this story. I'm curious to see where you're going to take it.

Keep up the good work, and way to go.

Sincerely,
Michelle W.