OMG I want more! This was wonderful... poor Vashj. I love how you described her emotions... but Illidan wasn't that harsh... now was he? Anyway, this story is very good, updte soon!

Very good, especially the 'I am not Vashana. I am a monster' bit. But in this story Vashj pops up in my mind more like a Naga Siren than a Sea Witch. Maybe my habit of rewinding lives backwards?

This was the first Warcraft fic I've ever read. It was a good one to start with. And it will be nice to see a exploration into Illidan's amazing talent for getting people on his side. And maybe something about the relation between the naga and the satyrs.

Well, this is Lurker here. anyways nice storie. definetly not your greatest work but it deserves more then 3 reviews. But i agree work on Blood Leprechan a bit more before updating this fic.

*oh and your now Officially in my Favorite authors...*

O,o...

I think it'd be better left as a one shot, since Blood Leprechaun is so much more worthy of your efforts.

And about the sea witch's spells sucking: please tell me that when I keep your Archmage/Fagseer/Dick Knight stuck in place while my demon hunter mana burns them for 150, after which they get smashed by a bolt of forked lightning, arrowed some more and killed like the helpless fools that they are.

Naga is an absolutely DEADLY hero because of her frost arrows and her mind-ripping AoE spell.

And every Demon Hunter user gets her, panda, or cheesemaster second. Or in my case, naga, teddy, or Maiev =D

Yay! Another story. Of course, I have absolutely no way to judge authenticity, but since I already love the rest of your writing...

The scene with the transformative magic is well done. That and the total self hatred of the character.

aww poor vashj! I never thoight of the transformation like that, i only thought that they were transformed of their own faults,a nd they were bitter becuase they knew it but didn't accept it

Vashj wasnt a sorceress...no wonder the naga see witch's spells are so...crap...

Hmm...I can't wait to see where this goes