This was an excellent story. Considering how difficult it is these days for me to enjoy stories with R&A as the main pairing, I was thrilled to find one that caught my interest.

My only real complaint was with the epilogue. It requires me to suspend a bit more belief than I am capable to believe that Akane would so easily shrug off a 2 year absence after their reunion. 6 months or so I could see, Possibly 1 year, but 2 felt like a bit much.

Other than that, I enjoyed it start to finish. The writing is well done and the spelling, grammar, and punctuation are usually accurate. Excellent story. I'm quite happy to have been fortunate enough to have found it.

Thank you for writing this fanfic! I adored the plot, your characterizations (especially of Akane), and how well the story flowed. I'm especially glad you wrote Akane as you did because I too am sick of people exaggerating her character to the point she is written as abusive and psychotic.

Whoa @ Chapter 5's ending. WHOA. Kick to the head.

it's dojo buddy, not doujou thats like its tendo not tendou and kuno not kunou and yor mommas fat and ugly...like you

Hi!
I really enjoyed this, so moving, so deep, I really wanted to cry, maybe because I'm a little sensitive towards this topic of growing up, leaving school and the town where you spent your childhood and part of the adolescense (Is this how it's spelled?)

But also there are some things I didn't quite understand, what happened to Nodoka's house? Why did Ranma leave without a word? (I mean, he was acting so cold when he was supposed to feel everything magnified), and why didn't he return on his own? He knew about Akane's feelings, what was he doing all those six years?

And in the epilogue, what was he doing during the two years? Yes, he wanted to befriend Akane's manager, but why didn't he give her a call at least? (Sorry, I'm also sensitive about dissapearing boyfriends... [LunaGitana gazes at the cellphone])

Anyway, I like your writing, the way you describe every character psyque and vision of life, their interaction and that you keep them IC pretty much. Now let's get to the important matter...

YAY! Cookies!

aww, thats so cute! i like it! it was dramatic! sweet, romantic, a little humorous. all the things a good love story needs! i say this story shuould gat an A+! ^_^

That was one of the best written fanfics in the history of fandom, from the 80's w/ it's Star Trek to the Hogwarts freaks of today. I thank from the bottom of my heart for the quality of your writing. Additionally, the story was also good.

COOKIES!

O wow, that made me want to cry!! I seriously stopped reading for a moment so i wouldn't. Your a really good writer too, i love your stories! its all well written pls keep it up!

This is so good =]

first off. this was a really big tearjearker. i tried holding the tears in. this is so sad. yasuo. the memories of ranma and akane when they were 16.

i think you're an amazing writer. i couldn't stop reading this. the mystery of ranma's house? who burnt it?

i find it so sad.

haha i love romance XD.

please keep writing. this is going to always be one of my favorites :).

really good story ^^

0.o what they have a son?! this is getting more and more interesting!XD hahaha

good start =) interesting to read ^^

Wow, just... amazing. It's the best Ranma story I've read so far (and i have read quite a few...).

I mean everything is fitting, Ranma's into character (which rarely happens in these kinds of stories) and everything is just... wow.

Ten thumbs up, at least. Way to go.