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gaurdian of hell 2008-09-02 . chapter 1
it's dojo buddy, not doujou thats like its tendo not tendou and kuno not kunou and yor mommas fat and ugly...like you
LunaGitana 2008-05-11 . chapter 10
Hi!
I really enjoyed this, so moving, so deep, I really wanted to cry, maybe because I'm a little sensitive towards this topic of growing up, leaving school and the town where you spent your childhood and part of the adolescense (Is this how it's spelled?)

But also there are some things I didn't quite understand, what happened to Nodoka's house? Why did Ranma leave without a word? (I mean, he was acting so cold when he was supposed to feel everything magnified), and why didn't he return on his own? He knew about Akane's feelings, what was he doing all those six years?

And in the epilogue, what was he doing during the two years? Yes, he wanted to befriend Akane's manager, but why didn't he give her a call at least? (Sorry, I'm also sensitive about dissapearing boyfriends... [LunaGitana gazes at the cellphone])

Anyway, I like your writing, the way you describe every character psyque and vision of life, their interaction and that you keep them IC pretty much. Now let's get to the important matter...

YAY! Cookies!
Pop Dragon 2008-04-22 . chapter 10
aww, thats so cute! i like it! it was dramatic! sweet, romantic, a little humorous. all the things a good love story needs! i say this story shuould gat an A+! ^_^
MonkeyBiznez 2007-11-29 . chapter 10
That was one of the best written fanfics in the history of fandom, from the 80's w/ it's Star Trek to the Hogwarts freaks of today. I thank from the bottom of my heart for the quality of your writing. Additionally, the story was also good.
MonkeyBiznez 2007-11-28 . chapter 2
COOKIES!
soccerfanatic16 2007-09-30 . chapter 10
O wow, that made me want to cry!! I seriously stopped reading for a moment so i wouldn't. Your a really good writer too, i love your stories! its all well written pls keep it up!
Saviek 2007-08-08 . chapter 9
This is so good =]
Saviek 2007-07-12 . chapter 10
first off. this was a really big tearjearker. i tried holding the tears in. this is so sad. yasuo. the memories of ranma and akane when they were 16.

i think you're an amazing writer. i couldn't stop reading this. the mystery of ranma's house? who burnt it?

i find it so sad.

haha i love romance XD.

please keep writing. this is going to always be one of my favorites :).
totallyloud 2007-07-06 . chapter 10
really good story ^^
totallyloud 2007-07-06 . chapter 5
0.o what they have a son?! this is getting more and more interesting!XD hahaha
totallyloud 2007-07-06 . chapter 2
good start =) interesting to read ^^
Rachel 2007-05-10 . chapter 10
Wow, just... amazing. It's the best Ranma story I've read so far (and i have read quite a few...).

I mean everything is fitting, Ranma's into character (which rarely happens in these kinds of stories) and everything is just... wow.

Ten thumbs up, at least. Way to go.
RoninAlchemist25 2007-01-26 . chapter 5
The look on my face at that last sentence was a where-the-F*CK-did-THAT-come-from look...this is a really good story, especially the quality of detail in all the important points.
Kitten Kisses 2007-01-10 . chapter 10
Aww, mushy, but not cheesy or too cliche.

...Seriously. I enjoyed this story a lot more than I thought I would. It's rare anymore that I read something, smile, laugh a little bit, and then feel sorry for someone...cry a bit...

This was, by far, one of my favorite Ranma 1/2 stories I've read on here. Despite the ending being a LITTLE cheesy, it was still good...and written so well.

Thanks for a magnificent story.
Kitten Kisses 2007-01-10 . chapter 9
...Wow. I'm seriously impressed.

I hope the epilogue isn't cheesy or anything.
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