i think this one is a lot better than the first of this trilogy. adding Yori in there really spiced things up since as you said she had really 'developed'.hehe. Simia was a really well thought out character. really similar to Fukushima from Ron's first visit to Yamanuchi but i so more sexy. anyways, im gonna start on #3 now.

Aw! That mistltoe scene was the cutest thing ever. I was grinning so hard, I thought for sure it would split my face in two. A happy ending...*sigh*. I love happy endings.

You really are an amazing writer. I've read this story before a long time ago but never reviewed it. Anyway, when I got to the part where Ron 'deserted' Kim and the mission to go dance with Yori and started kissing her right on the dance floor, I got so mad that I had to stop reading. That's right. I actually had to get up and go get a glass of water and come back and read it. That's amazing! You inspire some powerful emotions in people with your stories.

I really want to kick Yori's ass right about now. Poor Kim!

This was another brilliant story. Once I got to chapter 4, it was hard for me to stop reading. It was just so well done and creative, especially because I think you wrote it before the episode "Gorilla Fist" came out. Well done, I'm looking forward to reading the next story in this series.

Good fic is so hard to come by. I'm glad I stumbled on your series. The intrigue was intriguing, the fights were epic, especially towards the end, and the kiss at the end was so sweet ^_^

Also, loved the disclaimers, and had a tear in my eye at 'so long, space cowboy' - mostly because I know where that came from ^^;

Well, Yori's sister. That was...unexpected.

I am liking the direction this is taking.

Ron's entrance is classic, and Moniques assertation that God is a hack is even more priceless.

Monique continues to earn many brownie points from me.

Enjoying your work immensely!

inspirational, tear jerking, beautiful and lovely.

I could spew adjectives all day, but just imagine i did, and let's skip to induvidual acheivments.

I love the plot. It could have been, as you said, the example of a tired old sequel to something brilliant, nowhere near as interesting as the first.

However, it wasn't. I loved Yori, despite her relationship with ron (usually i would resent someone involved as such, but you managed to make me love her), Kim's little dilemma was saddening and, again, inspirational. I could never even attempt at something so meaningful, something I believe could leave an impression, at least a little one, on every reader.

It certainly has on me.

Kudos for the first and smaller 'mini tale' second stories, both were undeniably magnificent. However, so far, this happens to be my favourite.

Definitely skittering off the read the next installment right now -

*~RoseMage~*

Whoa, wait a sec. Did you- did you just compare Ron with Christ back there? Sure the whole 'mystical power' thing was acceptable, but the capitalised personal pronouns? Simia asking him if Ron 'was Him'? Ron having a Presense and a Peace?
To put it plainly, that was offensive to me.

Aw, come on! Now Yori has to thrown into the Pit of Burning Monkies with Will. Geez.

this is a great story ive finished the first two and heding for the last one i hope its as good as this or better

later

Great finish to another great story. I was on edge the whole time and it made me laugh when laughter was appropriate and i was shocked when things turned dark. i cant wait to move on and read the rest of the series. thanks for the wonderful stories

I just finished reading all of the stories in this run, and I just wanted to say thank you. I completely and thoroughly enjoyed it, and just had to respond. Considering I respond to about 1 in 100 stories, you should definently consider this high praise. I greatly look forward to more of your work in the future!

Love your style of writing! But, because of you, I have become very socially-lax the last couple of days. :) Not like that's entirely a bad thing. For my friends maybe. Hehe, keep it up!!