Im probably being stupid but is it Starfire? Great poem Dont know how to describe it except that it is VERY good.

wow...I mean WOW...who could it be?I have a guess but I'm pro'lly wrong...Beast Boy?

I really don't know, for some reason I want to say Beast Boy but I have not way of backing that back up.

This shows what happens if when someone doesn't tell good job

well duh! it's raven's point of view! i think... O__o

Pwe...so sad this is.

As long as it never works it's way into a fic I think it's okie. Gyar, makes me wanna go huggle the Titans though. >_<

Good job by the way. Very provoking. ^_^

Hn.. I think it's Raven. Possibly Terra, but it seems rather Ravenish.

You really should get published! I'm gonna take a wild guess and say Beast Boy. I have a new one out, too. Hope you could read it! Once again, beautiful!

omg! who was that! oh, you have to tell me!

this is the first thing i payed attention to all day (Including classes) very well written. Reading the other one I need to review now. Keep up the poetry

Willow

Another nice, dark, angsty poem... Hm... I need to muse a bit on who it is... Nice work. ^_^

For some reason, reading suicidal poems actually makes me feel better today. Great work.

O, fabulous. I love that, 'drips of velvet red,' and 'the soft wind transforms with deadly force'. And I like the last line, and all that it implies. ^_^

Well, I know that you feel Rae and death go hand in hand, but this time, this poem really felt like it was BB-centric.

"Thinking back to the past.
I knew our friendship would never last."

But then the line "The darkness of my thoughts consume me." just totally made me think of Raven again. It really COULD be anybody, though.

The diction for the suicide seemed rather simplistic...it was detailed, sure, but it just...happened. BOOM. Over and done with. So cool...mean, lolz, but cool. :P

I also liked how different your poem was punctuation wise. You didn't really aim to control how the reader read this; you made every line it's own independent sentence, and then coupled it with another rhyme. It made everything seem so...I dunno...maybe 'precise' or 'absolute' would be the right word?

My vocab sucks worse today, so forgive me for that, lolz! But all in all, I love this poem just like I love all of your others! ^_^ You go girl! :P

that's a very well written poem.. :3 good work