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| little-angels-razorblade 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abusegood story but i have a couple comments. have you never heard of putting chapters on different pages. i mean that is a lot to read. 'Leo and the source appeared and killed me,but when they tried to kill me'-that makes no sense at all. they killed her but then they tried to kill her. confusing. |
| Charming-Lynn 2005-03-17 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED IT! Beautiful story! |
| CrazyGabs 2004-09-20 ch 1, | abuselol i like this ending better than the othger lol! But its a really good story as are you others! |
| Bluley 2004-09-16 ch 1, | abuseI just wanted you to know how much I enjoyed your story. I was scared right up to the final part it would have a dark ending, I'm glad it didn't. Thanks for sharing it. |
| kathy 2004-09-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI would just like you to know that I enjoy your stories. It is obvious that you are a Piper fan. It has been a while since you posted one- I hope that we don't have to wait so long for the next one. I have seen your stories here and at The Book of Shadows. I really like that site but it really doesn't have a lot of Piper stories. I thought that you had some good plot twists in this story . The idea to summon future Piper and Paige was great. |
| Lola 2004-09-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseYAY! Happy future! I think you should do a sequel. About the baby or whatever. one thing though...you should have uploaded the chapters in seperate instalments...it was a bit long. Luv your fic! |