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little-angels-razorblade
2006-01-29
ch 1,
abusegood story but i have a couple comments. have you never heard of putting chapters on different pages. i mean that is a lot to read.
'Leo and the source appeared and killed me,but when they tried to kill me'-that makes no sense at all. they killed her but then they tried to kill her. confusing.
Charming-Lynn
2005-03-17
ch 1,
abuseI LOVED IT!
Beautiful story!
CrazyGabs
2004-09-20
ch 1,
abuselol i like this ending better than the othger lol! But its a really good story as are you others!
Bluley
2004-09-16
ch 1,
abuseI just wanted you to know how much I enjoyed your story. I was scared right up to the final part it would have a dark ending, I'm glad it didn't. Thanks for sharing it.
kathy
2004-09-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseI would just like you to know that I enjoy your stories. It is obvious that you are a Piper fan. It has been a while since you posted one- I hope that we don't have to wait so long for the next one. I have seen your stories here and at The Book of Shadows. I really like that site but it really doesn't have a lot of Piper stories. I thought that you had some good plot twists in this story . The idea to summon future Piper and Paige was great.
Lola
2004-09-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseYAY! Happy future! I think you should do a sequel. About the baby or whatever. one thing though...you should have uploaded the chapters in seperate instalments...it was a bit long. Luv your fic!
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