yayness! that really was good, and ash is right, he's gonna have tyo deal with that kinda mushiness for a long time XD. thank you soo much for this story :)

hehe, i don't think you did a bad job at all. heck next time you could combine both genres :p

no problem at all with the gymshipping; i love it! ^_^

yay! i'm excited! I can't wait to finish reading :) lol srry...

I looked it up and now I think Coney Island is in New York XD I still wanna go ,
GaryXMisty is still better than BrockXMisty oh! And I hate AAML AAMRN, and more AAMR! (AshXMisty)
I wish you'd stop writing pokeshipping and write egoshipping
love the story, good luck

Where is Coney Island? Cause I wanna go!

yay! Gymshipping is my favorite pokemon pairing! =D

That was really cute! I initially read this for the gymshipping, but I also loved the Coney Island glory-days aspect. I don't know much about the place, but your story reminded me of this cute book I read called The Beast, which I think was also a traveled-back-in-time Coney Island story.

I liked how you included Team Rocket in there, and thought it was cute how Meowth wanted to go on the rides...and when the two factions met up, how they were able to set their differences aside and Ash inviting them...it was just really cute! I know I said that like 70 times, but this story was, and it made me smile. Thanks a lot.

Uh...Brock and Misty why not Ash and Misty

My mom grew up in New York, so I grew up hearing stories about Coney Island just like Ash!! And now I want to go to Coney Island myself. :) Great job, the gymshippy factor made it twice as good.

You know what? I don't like him very much, but I will go back to Coney Island with him! They really should rebuild it...
On the story! it was really good, but from your author's note I was expecting the pairing to be a bit more hidden from the end. I don't like gymshipping and I never read fics that have it in there, but I went through this ENTIRE THING! That should tell you it's pretty good!
Keep it up!

Very nice fic so far. I'm not a gymshipper, but I can muster it. My favorite of all the shippings being rocketshipping. I'm enjoying reading the fic, even though I've never been to Coney Island. Maybe I can have my folks take me sometime.

Good story!! I understand that your sister likes gymshipping, which is sweet that you put it in there, but no more. I am a strait pokeshipping fan. Nothing more. Keep up the good work.

Good story so far. One question? Why are you having Brock give hints to Misty? Huh? Why not Ash? Do you have something against him or Pokeshipping? Brock and Misty are not ment to be. Only with Ash. Hopefully, you have some hints about them, without Brock.

Oh wow... that was great! It gave me warm fuzzies... I smiled through the whole last chapter! Yes it was corny but it reminded me of my boyfriend and I, how we act sometimes. Hehheh. But this was great! I used to write some BAMRN...but that was, like, 3 years ago. Stil... this was good enough to make me read a pokemon fic which I haven't had the heart to do in ages. WAY TO GO!!