Misty would have trapped ash's arm not Brock's

dude this is pikachu and ketchup

i'm sorry i dont why i got so mad about that i guess i didnt pay attention to the summary or authors notes so sorry and if i said anything about a war i dont know what i was thinking and dont think i'm some psyco, pokemon obsessed person whos room is all about pokemon but i do watch, play, and read pokemon but i'm not obsessed with it so like i said i'm sorry. pokeshipping forever!

i hate this story i hate gymshipping and now brock is on my death list, pokeshipping is the best i will only read pokeshipping for now on i am declaring war against gymshipping just like i did against pearlshipping this story just pissed me off all i care about are pokeshipping and misty and all gymshippers i have alot of lv.100 pokemon and other strong pokemon so be afraid

just to make it clear brock is now on my death list along with giovioni and also if your a pokeshipper help me gather pokeshippers for the war i'm starting with the pearlshippers sooner or later it'll be against gymshippers too, so write a story about ASH AND MISTY to show how much dawn is a b*tch and (i dont care if your a gymshipper) also keep brock out of the story (he's now a threat and on my death list) so just say he's dead and if possible dawn too and ash and misty talk bad about them after they die

one thing BACK OFF BROCK!

Another totaly in charecter story very ... intresting pairing but i loved it.

aww Brock and Misty are so sweet together i like this couple

your story was very beautyfull and amazing

yayness! that really was good, and ash is right, he's gonna have tyo deal with that kinda mushiness for a long time XD. thank you soo much for this story :)

hehe, i don't think you did a bad job at all. heck next time you could combine both genres :p

no problem at all with the gymshipping; i love it! _

yay! i'm excited! I can't wait to finish reading :) lol srry...

I looked it up and now I think Coney Island is in New York XD I still wanna go ,

GaryXMisty is still better than BrockXMisty oh! And I hate AAML AAMRN, and more AAMR! (AshXMisty)

I wish you'd stop writing pokeshipping and write egoshipping

love the story, good luck

Where is Coney Island? Cause I wanna go!

yay! Gymshipping is my favorite pokemon pairing! D

That was really cute! I initially read this for the gymshipping, but I also loved the Coney Island glory-days aspect. I don't know much about the place, but your story reminded me of this cute book I read called The Beast, which I think was also a traveled-back-in-time Coney Island story.

I liked how you included Team Rocket in there, and thought it was cute how Meowth wanted to go on the rides...and when the two factions met up, how they were able to set their differences aside and Ash inviting them...it was just really cute! I know I said that like 70 times, but this story was, and it made me smile. Thanks a lot.