 Ezzie 2005-01-17 . chapter 16 Great story! I liked every single chapter of it. Loved the ending too. |
 karientsje 2005-01-16 . chapter 16 Didi, thank you for writing the story. I wish you could write for the show! The story contains a great balance between action and characterdevelopment. I loved also the connection between Matt and Hoshi. They would make a great couple. Perhaps you could write a sequel to explore this chemistry? I would love to see the reaction from the other crewmates, especially Reeds.
Greetings!
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 The Libran Iniquity 2005-01-16 . chapter 16Wow. Fantastic ending, fantastic story. Just one little thing... the tea. It's Earl Grey. With an "e". We don't spell it with an "a" in England :)
But anyway. I thoroughly enjoyed this... and I'm probbaly repeating myself now :s. OK. Congrats on a job very well done :D
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 ryn 2005-01-15 . chapter 16 I LOVED the whole saga! You have a wonderful way with words and making the characters come to life and behave believably! This would have made a terrific Enterprise episode capturing the tension of their plight but most importantly, the camaraderie and banter that went on between the characters of classic Trek and STNG.
I hope you continue writing about the MACOs, especially Major Hayes and take his relationship with Hoshi a little farther. I loved the character and just wished the Enterprise had done more with it. You do it instead!
Thanks for a wonderfully written story! |
 tony 2005-01-15 . chapter 16 That was a really good story...is there going to be a follow up? |
 Sandra S 2005-01-15 . chapter 16Very entertaining story, I enjoyed reading this. |
 travis 2005-01-01 . chapter 15 keep updating, it's a really good story and has a good pace now; Keep it up. |
 Rinne 2004-12-31 . chapter 15Very nice chapter. I love the interactions between the characters, you've done them very well. |
 Tata 2004-12-31 . chapter 15 Hey, this is really getting good! Don't make us wait too long for more! |
 Karientsje 2004-12-30 . chapter 15Good chapter! I love the fact that they have to rely on Hoshi! Keep on writing! |
 Reedie 2004-12-30 . chapter 15Great chapter, like always :) Can't wait for the next one! |
 The Libran Iniquity 2004-12-29 . chapter 15*puts hand up* Um, there's a grammatical boo-boo in the disclaimer. You either wanna say "are you still reading these things" or "blah blah this thing" :p
And crap, I need another chapter (pardon my French). It flowed really well, probably better than the other chapters (although it's been a litle while since I've read them ;) ), and I'm still enjoying the characterisations of the MACOs. Wow. Long word ^^
And that's all you're gonna get out of me for the moment... I need more sugar, going to make myself a nice hot mug of tea, and wait patiently for THAT DAMN UPDATE!! ;)
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 Rinne 2004-12-11 . chapter 14Really good chapter. |
 Tata 2004-12-09 . chapter 14 Nice chapter. Action, humour, drama... and the teaser line has me wanting for more soon! |
 The Libran Iniquity 2004-12-09 . chapter 14The disclaimer was just perfect, sweetie ;) and my friends are now shooting me weird looks because of what *they* called a squeal of laughter. *sighs* I don't know...
Anyhoo. What a chapter! It may be first thing in the morning right now, but look at all that action!! And now I look forward to the next chapter :)
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