your story is so beautiful. thank you

Wow, and I hardly ever use those words when talking about a story, but this was powerful, and beautiful and sad in all the right amounts. Just, wow, great, great piece.

Cute! ^^

So cute.

*gurgles* *melodramatically bursts into tears* This is brilliant. I've always loved thinking and studying Iruka and Naruto's relationship and this fic, my dear, is everything I've always loved most in it!

I really like the last line.

Very good portrayal of Iruka. Nicely done!

Good stuff...there really too few fic's out there that show Iruka's contributions.

God, that's sweet. *tears in eyes* The way you describe how Iruka and Naruto's relationship progresses, and how Iruka gets another chance at happiness because of his acceptance of Naruto... *happy sigh*

Of course, chibi!Naruto is just so flubbin' adorable that there are no words. XD

So cute. :)

This is some of the finest introspective I've seen.

The emotions shown throughout the piece is profound, and by the end, it's rounded *brilliantly.*

And it has Iruka. :D

I'm the *happiest* having found this piece.

^_~ Luffs and kisses! Osaka-neechan

A really great Iruka-centric fic.

aw..it's soo cute. i love the ending. XD

^_^ sweet.

:) This made me smile. I liked this!