Oh pleaze continue! That will be zo muzch beztter!

oooooouuuuuuu. What's the seceret plan? Will she still act nice? Will Lila go with Stinky. And what is ith the whole Lila changed her mind thing. Gerald was giving Arnold (elbow hits the air and winks) a hint. Does he know? And Helga had one of her crazy dreams. Love love love it!

Good story! :) I like how you made Gerald compassionate to Arnold and accepting of Helga.

:-D messa like. messa like very much

Um... What happened to the birthday? anyway, good story, but I think you're rushing things a little bit. Try to break the events down a little and get into the story more. You've got a great story line and you should make the most of it.

What happend to the birthday part? but otherwise, it's GOOD! write more! _

Hurry up with the next chapter! Is it true that Lila was kissing Stinky? I was a bit lost there.

How the hell you go forget your birtday

COOl! can Helga switch her hair style to a pony tail or something that would be cool.

It is good. But um..you need to make sure you finish words. J is not a word, it is a letter. Just saying, I mean I know what it was but, ya know, it would help. It is really good though.

Wow!I like the sweet side of all this!Go on!

Insteresting so far, HG. There are a few run-ons that make things a bit harder to follow but you're still doing a pretty good job. I look forward to reading the rest!

That kinda didnt make sense. One, how did out of the blue Arnold think that Helga has a secret. There wasnt anything building up to that. And what about the birthday party? The only thing in there about that was that he handed out invitations. Im confused :S Cute story though...

it was sweet, gotta add some more, about his party and stuff.

) liked readin' it