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| Gibson18 2004-10-28 ch 1, | abuseIt's a good prologue to Beldo's part of the story. I think it was the only one that anyone has written yet, and it was good short story. My only suggustions are: fix the format, and go more into depth about Beldo's thoughts about Guy. |
| herr.flick 2004-09-10 ch 1, | abuseNot bad, not bad at all Its just a bit short try to make your storys longer im hoping for a new Azure dreams story made by you =) |
| Kiwi Queen 2004-09-09 ch 1, | abusehow can someone be such a great writer? boy you are great...der beste i would say ;) i'm german so i can't write so good stories in english...but even when i write in german i am not as great as you are...but i have to criticize one thing...sometimes i don't know who is saying what...okay whatever :) you are great! :) greez n kisses Kiwi |