It's a good prologue to Beldo's part of the story. I think it was the only one that anyone has written yet, and it was good short story. My only suggustions are: fix the format, and go more into depth about Beldo's thoughts about Guy.

Not bad, not bad at all

Its just a bit short try to make your storys longer

im hoping for a new Azure dreams story made by you )

how can someone be such a great writer? boy you are great...der beste i would say ;) i'm german so i can't write so good stories in english...but even when i write in german i am not as great as you are...but i have to criticize one thing...sometimes i don't know who is saying what...okay whatever :) you are great! :)

greez n kisses

Kiwi