Cool!! I hope you write more..

Good story, and I also like the longer exposition and extra detailing. Good characterizations.

Now if we could just get rid of the first reviewer who blithers on and on making no sense whatsoever and who failed to comment on the story at all, the reviews would be as enjoyable to read as the story.;)

Very interesting story. The oddity is, I mentioned in a couple of "Apprentice" groups that I belong to that if Dick Wolf (who is no fan of Reality TV from my understanding) wanted to gamble and try out Jennifer Massey (one of this season's "Apprentice" candidates) as a possible replacement for Elisabeth in the ADA role, this would be the kind of ADA I'd have in mind. I know if I were DW and show the show, I'd be intrigued enough by her (especially after the QVC task that aired on October 7) to ask Jennifer M. to come in and screen test even if there was little chance of her actually replacing Elisabeth as she happens to be a lawyer in real life, and coupled with her screen presence might just be able to pull it off.

Walt

As always a great story line kept me puzzled and wanting more and more through out the story I can't wait for more.

Okay,what to write?...how about great characterization, exciting story plotline (particulary the appeal)

Awesome job all the way around.

Wow what a great story! I wish they'd consider casting someone with the chutzpah that Kathy displays. Thoroughly enjoyable. You have to do these longer stories more often. Very very good!

I certainly hope you posted this to the site!!