Hi there,

I am pretty pumped that there is another chapter to this story. I can't wait for the next update. This is a great sequel and you are a terrific writer. Can't wait to keep reading.. post something soon :)

You write some really intense stories!! I wouldn't worry so much about the editing. It's all good! Excellent!

Does anyone know where I can find Survival I? I would like to read what this is a sequel to. Only the first chapter is posted to fanfic. I tried the author's homepage, but found only the black hole that was Geocities. Thanks for any help.

Thanks for the update, another great chapter well worth the wait. Julie xx

The suspense that hangs over this entire story is absolutely brilliant. You begin it with mystery and questions but the suspense and mystery just continues to build throughout the entire story, and it is not a short story. What endurance to write and keep the balance in the skill of writing at such high levels with no lapse in expectations.

Someone else said you could be doing this for money instead of for our enjoyment. I agree, but I'm happy that we are the benefactors of your skill and time and energy.

Thank you, and please continue!

Wow, what a chapter. You know, an update is a wonderful thing also :)

Wow! Yeah, I know, my last review started exactly the same, but I can't help it, you leave me speachless with your writing talent! An awesome chapter, just like always! So intense and emotional! I totally love it! It's great that you are telling us through Parker and co now what happend one year ago. I always hoped for more details. I do have one question though: doesn't Parker have the recordings to prove that Jarod didn't rape or murder anyone and even struggled against the very idea? Please, please hurry up with the next chapter!
Oh, and chapters can't be too long only to short:)

This story has kept me on my toes since I first read it. It is full of tension and betrayal all of course stemming from the Centre or Lyle.

Everytime I think you closed the doors and blocked the exits you open a window only to close it again or appear to close it.

Wonderful story telling! This ranks up there with some of the best suspense writers I've ever read. Great job.

Thank you for another chapter! For writing and sharing.

Thanks for updating again! I've been waiting a long time to read a fantastic fic about The Pretender again! Loved the moment where Miss Parker and Jarod shared the very good memory:)! Looking forward to the next chapter as always!

Another incredible installment of this brilliant story. I'm still trying to figure out who Ms. Dewitt is. I also loved the memory Miss Parker shared with Jarod. So very sweet. I hope we get a few more of those soon.

Wendy

Yay, my week's made. :-D I'm so looking forward to the next chapter. M, wondering if the person Lyle want photo's of is the Major? Also wondering what MP is going to do with DeWitt and if she'll realise that DeWitt is in Lyle's or the Centre pay? Can't wait for the next chapt. Thanks for a great read.

Love your story!!

Wow! I'm so glad to find more on that awesome, fantastic, excellent - written story! Please help Jarod and update soon :) !

Another great chapter. I learn a lot, but it once again ended with more questions than the ones answered. Glad Miss P got to him when she did.

Can't wait for another chapter.

Wendy

My day's made. ;-D This story is growing by the chapter. Jarod is playing a dangerous game, I'm wondering if he's going to recover from this ordeal intact. And I'm wondering what Adam's plan is to keep them all safe. Please don't let us wait that long for another update. Very much looking forward to the next chapter.