That was PAINFULL. The whole rufus chase scene... I thought he was supposed to be smart? Well written as it was, I found it pretty annoying. But thats me, not you.

OMG I AM SO MAD AT KIM ALTHOUGH I PITY HER MICONCEPTION I LOVE RON MORE THEN HER AND ALL THE THINGS SHE WANTED "... wanted him to swoop around her and put a comforting arm around her. And should she cry, he would allow her to cry into his arm for as long as he felt the need to. He’d fight for her and protect her from harmful people." RON DID AL OF THAT 4 HER AND MORE I SWEAR KIM IS SO IGNORANT But 4 real don't take this as a flame 4 i'm sure u'll make my little Ronny happy in the end but i'm just venting my anger out at brutal way my poor Ron is being treated he deserves WAY better than that LOL I SOUND LIKE HIS MOM!

Phew! For a moment there I thought you were actually going to use rape as a plot twist, which is always a bad idea. Always.

But anyway, this is an engrossing fic. I very much approve.

Ahh! How DARE you leave it like that! That is CRUEL! That is wrong!

So not cool! Ahh...I'll read the sequal! Kims is being SUCH a hipocrite...she's doing the exact same thing Josh was!

Ugh! Anyways, I loved this though. Great job!

(:

Angelica

Hah! Kim acted like I do when I have coffee and chocolate at the same time... It only happened once- the Valentine's Day incident. Shiver.

Wonderful chapter!

DAMN...
Now THAT was a GREAT bit of work.
Not only do you effectively portray the characters in a somewhat more 'adult' way than they appear in the show- Ron's complex relationship with his parents (Even if I'm not entirely sure about it), Ron's discussions with Kim about her feelings for Josh, Ron's own internal conflict regarding his OWN feelings for Kim- but you manage to do so without changing anything from the way they're portrayed in the show itself.
Can't have been an easy thing to do, but you managed it very well; congratulations on that front.
Plus, of course, your in-depth analysis and portrayal of Kim's feelings for Ron gradually changing the more time they spend stuck together is expertly laid-out; you can really see WHY she's starting to think of him more as a 'guy' and less as just 'Ron' (If you know what I mean).
And as for your final idea about HOW their hands got stuck together...
If nothing else, you can definitely see that it was a VERY good thing they managed to stop Drakken completing that machine; if he'd managed to complete something that granted a wish that Ron had only THOUGHT, who knows what he could have accomplished if he'd used it deliberately?
I mean, it probably couldn't, say, erase Kim from existence, but it still wouldn't have been pretty, in my opinion; always good to see a classic Drakken-scale plot get taken down like that.
Admittedly, I remain somewhat uncertain about why Kim and Ron didn't just explain that they were stuck together from the beginning rather than deal with all that ridicule from Bonnie and the like, and there were some moments when I really wasn't sure HOW they were meant to do what they were doing in the plot with only one hand available (Like Ron's wild monkey antics while chasing after Monkey Fist's monkey ninjas after they nicked that scroll; how could he have kept on swinging fast enough to keep up with/stay ahead of an army of killer monkeys when he'd at least have to have Kim's hand on the back of one of his?), but those details don't detract from the overall plot, so I'm prepared to ignore them.
All in all, an excellent piece of work; keep it up!

You have no idea how thrilled I've been to read this!!

It's currently 3am in the morning- I'm wiped beyond belife, and I need to get up EARLY in the morning, but, I couldn't stop reading! I've never really bothered to read any KP fanfiction before, despite loving the television show, and enjoying the two movies.

Now- I don't know if I'll be able to cause I'll be comparing each fanfiction with THIS one. Seriously.

You've got everyone WONDERFULY IC (Do you know how hard it is to find THAT in fanfiction?!) You've kept the story interesting throughout, made me laugh, smile, and various other things while reading. I cant WAIT to read the next installment- (Which I noticed, you already have up & completed) But, I'm gonna be away for tommorow and I can't :( Rest assured though, that's gonna be the FIRST thing I do when I get back :3

This chapter has brought alot of emotions. I'm extremely sad for Ron, and extremely mad at Kim...how could she. It's all soo sad. Josh Mankey deserves a painful death...sigh...I can't wait to read the next 'book'. I'm really looking forward to that. Until then, keep on writing.

Danny

Nononononononononononono! Why did everything went wrong. HOW?! Everything was going perfectly until he HAD to think of that. Danm it! Life is not fair! And now I have only a few hours of sleep before I have to start my long weekend. ARGH! I want to know what happens next. This is too intense...WHY?! HOW?!(well 'how' was clearly stated...)

Danny

I feel so sorry for Kim. What a horrible day. That **, bonnie, better stop her evilness, or else blood would be the sacrifice need it to cleanse everything. Well, I guess the sacrifice one doesn't need to be a virgin...coughbonniecough. That snaky **, I hate her so much! I can't believe neither of them actually told everyone what was the really sitch, that they were stuck to each other. Sigh...

Danny

Hmm...I think there was a lot of progress here. Finally, KP is starting to open her eyes. It's about time. Man, I have to say, your chapters are REALLY LONG, and thats freaking awesome. This chapter was so good. I can't wait to finish this story and move to the second part of this story...and then the third...LOL! I'm so way behind! Until next time.

Danny

This chapter was definitely one of my favorite chapters. Kim's thought about Ron when she woke up. That was great. I hope Kim thinks of this some more.

danny

goddanm...Rufus! How can such a little thing do such a thing?! Rufus is way OC. It is one smart naked mole rat, not a trouble maker...sigh. I bet Kim and Ron's picture will be held as wanted all around the malls and Smarty Smart...

Kim was so OC...I can't actually picture her act like this, but it was fun reading it.

Danny

Very interesting story. So Kim and Ron are stuck together huh. This is quite the story. I'll be reading the rest later on, is really late and I'm getting sleepy. Until next time.

Danny