Okay, the Raichu belongs to Lt. Surge, the Blastoise belongs to Gary Oak and the Slowbro belongs to Lorelei. Oh, and this is something I forgot about since it never gets updated. Of course, I can't be one to talk, since my last update was last year. So I'm going to go now, but this is just as good as I left it!

What about Blane's forces? shouldn't there be a few snipers as well? A tad more detail would greatly add in the urgency of the situations. And also a bit "vaguility: would do nicely (new word: the process of being or having an incomplete thought; to be vague) I've got too much time on my hands.

Well, as always...

Write from the Heart

WTF? I haven't seen hide nor hair of this story in...a minimum of three months, and you give us a cliffy! Please, Dutchie, no more cliffies...please, Dutchie, no more cliffies...

nice! sorry i couldn't review the last chapter, with school and all, i had no time for fanfics. but, still, good story!

Kane's plan was pretty clever

Such a cool story so far... if your looking for inspiration how bout this? one chapter that follows this one, it also includes Misty and the people that have been captured by Team Rocket. Its just a sugetion.

Sorry if I haven't reviewed in a while but please contiue, I'm captivated by this epic tale.

and always...

Write from the Heart

So that;s how it happened. Poor Chris

Gary has a sister? I didn't know that. Anyway, the battles were good, especially gengar's Shadow trick.

WeirdDutchGuy, please add more! I beseech you! It's great!

well, i'm moving my review so i can do more than one, and i have a question. why do the people at delete the script format stuff? sometimes it's good! fanfictions can be on tv-ish! that's a part of my goal with the Yu-Gi-Oh/Whose Line crossover. oh, and a scoop for you, i'm giving my readers a sneak peek at my first crossover with the crossover of Yu-Gi-Oh and Whose Line. it'll be really good. oh, and if I didn't put you there before, I'm looking forward to this story, so it'll be put on the story alert list. stop with the cliffys! cliffies can die! except when they're necessary. that isn't necessary in chapter 6.

well...well...now you have a response to your review on my story...my crappy potter fic, well, don't even read it. i'm deleting it. and the fic is pretty dark. i'm writing a new fic, and then posting it at a later date. it's sort of a look inside. oh, and i'll try to add more description to my fics. sayonara!

The only mistakes I see here are just a couple of grammatical errors. Each chapter you write is more interesting than the last. It will be interesting to see who will win this battle although I have a feeling I know who. Your writing skills are only getting better. Keep up the good work.

Glad you added Ash into this mess... the problem, not the story, the story is awsome, I'm talking about the predicament they are in. Again, Very good fic, very descriptive. We have quite a bit in common (yes people do read the BIOS, they {Meaning just Me} just don't have lives)

P.S. I would be honored if you read and reviewed my first fic "Keeping Memories" which is completed. Being the kinda guy that's a softie it's a romance... funny how I used to hate the mushy stuff, but hey we all mature.

ARG! I Hate cliffs.[in fading voice] Especialy when I fall off them!

Please continue

cool plan kate thought up. ff isnt in stores its old but still it exallent i rented it from movie gallary in the US. best 5 bucks i everd used to rent a game. ff 2 comes out in november 1st in the U.S for the pc the ps2 and the xbox. rumors about it are conoel bulba, the old rebel turned K.G.B owner has been promoted and is lanching and invasion of the U.S. the other rumor is the newly freed U.S is ivading other contrys to overthrow the commie remigmes