Reviews for A test of loyalty

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cybertoothtiger 2008-02-01 ch 17,	abuseNo! That's it? I mean, that is a good place to leave it, but I want more! The Tony perspective and then the Jack perspective works so well, especially the complexity of his feelings for her.
cybertoothtiger 2008-02-01 ch 11,	abuseI love your Claudia. This, for example: "But she knew there was cruelty in him too, that a part of him understood the sadistic games they played." And I find your Ramon and Hector more believable than in the actual show.
cybertoothtiger 2008-02-01 ch 9,	abuseOkay, I'm reading through the whole thing now, so I might stop bombarding you with reviews. Just, the pursing of his lips before he punches, the description of his reaction to the finger. OMG. I can see it all. Like Michelle, I am feeling instantly sickened yet mesmerised by the voyeuristic exercise.
cybertoothtiger 2008-02-01 ch 8,	abuse"Jack turned around and waited for the inevitable blow to the back of the head, which would send him into unconsciousness. He didn’t have to wait long." E. Ow.
cybertoothtiger 2008-02-01 ch 6,	abuseJack's struggle with the addiction is just heartbreaking... begging for a little time so he can prove himself. This is really good. I'm worried about him driving, though. :-( And having to fix again so soon to test the product. Excellent angst.
cybertoothtiger 2008-02-01 ch 4,	abuse"She was always emotionally connected, yet when she made decisions she could be coolly detached. Tony wondered if she wasn’t better at that than him." Ain't that the truth.
cybertoothtiger 2008-02-01 ch 3,	abuseOh, wow. This is good! I hadn't thought about how Jack's total inability to deal with authority figures would hinder him in undercover operations, but it makes sense. He would have to figure out how to toe the line, but not too much.
Grym 2006-03-31 ch 1,	abuseAh - nice start here! Definitely grabs the reader and yanks them in by the hair... (Poor old Jack. That man just can't ever get a break, can he?)
BadHatHarry 2006-03-19 ch 17,	abuseVery good story, well-written. Hope for an update.
Jack-rocks 2004-10-22 ch 17,	abusePLEASE UPDATE THIS! This story is so gripping and I want to know what is going to happen. Don't stop here, please! :)
Alien Angie 2004-10-12 ch 17,	abuseOh wow! I love this fic, please update soon! Angie x
Ivy3 2004-09-25 ch 16,	abuseVery interesting, I'm intrigued. Keep it up.
bobdabuilder0804 2004-09-23 ch 16,	abuselol - this updat made me laugh, I could just imagine T and G watching all 'oh my god.' while jacks like, chill, im just getting laid - whats the pob guys??LMAO!!
Dr. Eminem 2004-09-19 ch 14,	abuseGreat job. Poor Jack and Tony even having to make such hard decisions. Great job. :)
bobdabuilder0804 2004-09-15 ch 8,	abuseOkay I tried to review chapter 12 and 13, but it wouldn't let me for some reason, so I had to come back here to do it. All I can say is ouch!! Thats one way to gain someones trust!! Im really enjoying this and hope theres more soon. It will be good to see where you take this now he has their trust. Hope he gets somehting done with those fingers, thats a major OUCH!!

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