 Me 4/14/11 . chapter 1 One of the best fics I ever read of Ranma! Own story, and still right on the correct tune. Loved it! |
 DemonBlade 8/28/02 . chapter 2this isn't half bad! |
 D-Chan 9/15/01 . chapter 2 This is very good. I think you should write more on Akane's training. Spend equil amounts of time telling the story whith each character. Please contine writing. |
 Ghost in the Machine 9/14/01 . chapter 2 Nice to see this hasn't been abandoned. Only one spot I'm having a trouble with as a reader, but
nothing to drastic. I believe Ranma would severely pound a man who slapped him, teacher or not.
A man who slaps a student just because the student doesn't believe Bruce Lee is the greatest thing since
slice bread doesn't deserve to be a teacher of Jeet Kune Do or anything else for that matter. (Also, a quick peek at
Nerima might be called for at some point.) |
 neko-chama 9/14/01 . chapter 1an interesting idea. MORE! MORE! |
 Nixa 2/13/01 . chapter 1 Well that was interesting. I like it. I can't wait to read what else you have in store for the former Nerimian martial artists. Oh and by the way... Ukyo- must. Defeat. Shampoo. Jeez, that was a humiliating defeat. |
 Jiefeng1999 2/12/01 . chapter 1 Manages to be canonical yet Alternertive universe at the same time without senseless OOC behaviour.One of the better pieces of writing in a while.Keep up the good work |
 Edmondia Dantes 2/10/01 . chapter 1Hey, this looks pretty cool. Get the next part out quick, okay? |
 Ghost in the Machine 2/9/01 . chapter 1All right. This looks promising. (Though I've always figured Ukyo as the best cook of the group after
Kasumi. She makes a living at it on her own. Cologne is shown as doing most of the cooking at the Cat Cafe.) |
 Joey1 2/9/01 . chapter 1Looks pretty good so far, I'll be looking forward to the next part. |
 Lord Jahaj 2/9/01 . chapter 1 Great story. Seems to start a little off-key, but hopefully will get going pretty good. |