hey good story update soon.
on your C2 I like sonic crossovers I wrote one and update soon ...wait I said that already

Wonderful. I loved it.
Hmm...what is she ever going to do about Miya and her ghouly henchmen? Can't wait to read the next chapter.:D

Hm...interesting concept you have here. Am wondering where you're going to go with this.

Intreasting taking the name literly. I don't like
Miya eather.

Oh, Ap, I think he now should send you many emails telling you how harsh you are and to go away. What a flame.

cOOL! kEEP GOING! i LIKE POKEMON! ;) FOR NOW...

OH...What happens next...

Seriously, this is a great story so far. It's so hard to find good fanfics these days...

Just one suggestion: could you make the chapters a little longer than this?

Keep up the good work!

/~*Van Skylion*~/

Not a bad idea. It's different.

Wow, I really like this story! Update! I wanna see what happens next!

I know that you might consider this to be a flane,but I am going to view it as intensely harsh critisism.
So here goes-

Don't write stupid stories,please.Thankyou.It would take alot of work for this to be viewed as good.