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Reviews For: The Men in My Life - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

Yami Vizzini
2005-11-02
ch 1,
abuseWell, what can I say? It's not much as far as plotline goes, although it serves as an useful look at Kari's perspective.
kid
2005-06-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseI couldn't have said it better myself.
jennifer
2004-11-15
ch 1, anon.
abusethe way you write ur digimon fanfics is so incredible, it's like it actually happened on the show. Good Job!
digiguy-01
2003-09-22
ch 1,
abusei was just lookin for stories and ran across this one. i just gotta say u write some deep stuff. even if it is a simple anime u write some kool stuff. like writin books and stuff. i can't compare my story wit yours. not just this one but all of them. haven't read them all but just by readin a few i know the rest r good. aight pc
Miracles
2002-10-15
ch 1,
abusei want to respond to wat sir brass of the pen said first of all f*** takari. Second how the hell is TK the underdog? Kari hanged out with him a lot so how the hell was he the underdog give me one f*** way he was the underdog ONE!
Neo-darkstar
2002-07-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseGood job on this story Silver. This sounds like something that Kari would say about TK and Davis and how she views her relationships with them. It's obvious that she does indeed view TK as sort of a twin brother and Davis as a really good friend. I could almost hear Kari's voice inside of my head saying all of this stuff. Anyhow, keep up the good work.
Lady Devimon
2002-07-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseKeep up the good work! I'm surprised you were able to use T.K. and Davis in this fic as best friends. although i'm not going to bad mouth you, i think it is a bit weird and cool that you called them 'best friends' thats a good sign that aleast someone out their sees them atleast as friends.

Lots of Luv, Lady D.
Silver Warrior
2002-05-10
ch 1,
abuseOf course Kari views them both as friends. Davis is a lot like Tai, and TK is a lot like Matt when Matt isn't trying to act all cool and stuff.
Hopeful Writer
2002-01-06
ch 1,
abuseMuch loved. It's been a long time since I've thought about Kari, Davis, and TK's real relationships (not the one's the fan writer's make). To be honest, I like the idea of Kari with TK rather than Kari with Davis, but I don't think she would ever purposely be mean to Davis. She might tease him, like you said, but she would intentionally hurt him. And even though Davis has a crush on her (Im pretty sure it's not love; he's just a kid), I don't think he's not going to change and start to like someone else, someone who can return the feelings. I liked this story a lot and I'm glad you wrote it. I look forward to reading more. Wow, that was a really long review.
Nexus Prime
2001-12-30
ch 1,
abuseWhoever set that review Silver was talking about, and anyone who agrees with him or her: KARI DOES NOT HATE DAVIS, AND THAT'S FINAL. THERE'S NOT A FREAKING THIS YOU CAN DO ABOUT IT. KARI DOES NOT, I REPEAT, NOT, HATE DAVIS. GET THROUGH YOUR THICK SKULLS.
Silver: Ever consider a professional writing career?
Sir Brass of the Pen
2001-11-27
ch 1,
abuse*Claps* YAY!!! Good job!! I'm glad there's someone besides me and a few others who doesn't like the jerky Davis but knows he's a cool guy. Good writing, oh and IMO, you didn't need to defend you reasons for writing this fic. Why? Because its your fic. Excellent job of portraying both characters in truthful light. Even though I'm a die-hard Takari fan, I don't believe that she's really in love with T.K. during the show (hey, its good to dream for us T.K. fans :-D). Also, I completely agree with you that Davis isn't a bad guy and that Kari doesn't hate his guts. A little Davis bashing is ok as long as its light hearted, after all thats what was done to him in the show by his friends. Anyway, just for fun, why don't you try writing a true blue Takari. You never know, you might find that T.K. was an underdog as well, even if others didn't see it that way.
Cheers,
~Brass
PseudonymA1
2001-07-26
ch 1,
abuseLove this! even though I'm a die-hard takari fan, I really enjoyed this, and it seems absolutely true
Kaeera
2001-06-24
ch 1,
abuseVery true, really. That's the way of thinking which fits Kari the best(ugh, in this sentence are some grammatical errors, not? Don't be angry, I am just a german pupil who likes to write poems instead of listening to the English teacher). I liked it how you worked out the good sides of TK and Davis, you did a great job! I love your stories*clicks add author to favorites* Write more!
xjuu
2001-04-04
ch 1,
abuseI support Daikari, but it's really good anyay!
Stealth Photographer
2001-03-10
ch 1,
abuseI love the story. Most people write Davis as a jerk, but I like the way you protrayed him. He reminds me of my friend, he somethimes says stupid things, but he's there when you need him. They are both also the comic relief. (Ha Ha, just kidding)
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