Cool story! :)

so cute! I felt all fluffy and tingly inside! great job with the fluffynes!

That's really sweet! and very nice too. ^__^ Great work!

How cute ^_^ Even while I was watching it over and over again, I never realized that was the 38th episode. Duh. Most assuredly not a coincidence, but would've been nicer if it'd had a stronger 383 vibe. The ep, not your fic^^ I just find the idea of Sanzo licking Hakkai's hand (and calling him 'Kai) very amusing and terribly kawaii ^_^

Oh my, definitely NOT a coincidence. ^_^

Wai! Kawaii... *melts into a puddle of fangirl goo*

Ep. 38... one of the most 83 shippy eps you'll ever come across!! I've been thinking about an idea similar to yours before, but yours is so much better!! With Sanzo kissing Hakkai's hand...

This is just too cute to pass up!! Great job!!

Episode 38 seemed to have more rampant Kouryuu x Koumyou hints than anything. I think think the 38 is just a coincidence. Considering Sanzo barely talked to anyone in this episode, trying to pair for ANYONE in this episode would be quite difficult.

The FLUFF! ^_^ This piece was very nice, and the writing style was very much like my own...so that's part of why I liked this so much. :D But the other thing is that every time I read more of 83, I begin to like it more and more. Though I usually prefer 58...this really struck a chord with me. Just lovely; great job, suzuki-san! It was a NEAT idea, you know; I never would have thought of something like this! +_+ Everyone here gets such wonderful ideas...
Well, I hope to see more fics from you in the future, whether it's Saiyuki or otherwise! ^_^ Good luck with your next writing!
--Keruri

your fic is very nice in a way that it fits very well within the scenes of that ep^^ good one!