ehh, what was the end?

gomen... i didnt really get it...

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this story is soo good i can picture it all so perfectly it's like watching a movie!! Please update soon...(unless that was the end??) anyway your an amazing author keep it up!

why crusify the great lord sesshomaru he4 need not be punished and why was t3here no one in the chrch

why must the deliciously evil die young

You seem to have a clear vision of the story and it translates easily to the reader. Dialogue, which in my opinion is the most difficult to write is also well done, with feelings and insight into each character being given with all most every line. Keep up the good work.

it was abvious as soon as i put the words "Unless I can" and "I still Have an Hour" together i can understand his thought process for a reason you shoulden't be knowing so peace and Update ^_^

i'm glad i motavated you to write that chaper and update and yes i'm a dude @ the time u read my bio it was fuked up by my little cousin but now it's about right

ah! ok ending it there is just mean ::pout:: It's so scary how sad and real this story actually is. If you could i'd like to make a comment to everyone who reads this story. It really makes u think if someone actually sees things like this...than how many act apon it. And how many really can't be saved. Or if anyone cares enough to notice it's happening. Ya know? I felt like that once, but my friend pulled me out of it. I am so grateful toward her too. My life couldn't be happier now and i owe it all to her for just being there for me. Hopefully this story is going to help alot of those people either come to terms with themselves or with the knowledge of a friends actions they just shrugged of as being "no big deal" It is a big deal! you need to help them if they want it or not because at the moment they don't want to think that they might actaully have the strenght the survive and make something of themselves because it's too hard and not trying is an easier. Thanks.

interesting story.
I would like to know what happens.
Please update soon,

i've been meaning to add this to my fave story list but i absolutely forgot about it. thanks for signing into one of my reviews. :) Now i can keep track of this. What can I say, absolutely a masterpiece and very down to earth. I love for this simplicity of this story kinda ties in with the whole Tsunami disaster when people from around the world are being generous. This is the kind of story that people should be reading not promoting violence, sex and all that ** going around. :)

I loved it. I'm not going to say what I think. I will see next chapter if I'm right.
Update soon.

i read the first 3 chapters. it was great. i hope you continue writing. i look foward to reading more.

Nice. I SO have an idea, but I am not going to announce it, since there's a damn good chance I'm dead wrong.

I liked this chapter. The best, actually. I'm guessing it has to do with all the action and turmoil and angst and sadness and all that good stuff.

But of course, it'll keep getting better, as this is only the beginning.

Oh, and I would like to say: YOU FINALLY UPDATED.

Nice chapter.

U P D A T E S O O N.

Cheers,
t.jade

Wow that was so good...i could picture it so well...partyly because i was inthat situtation once but still...I wonder how did he get a feather? o0o i hope u update soon!

it's good so far. i don't particually like au storys but it's good non the less and now that u had me read it i have to finish it so wms!

27 days 27 days 27 days 27 days 27 days 27 days you hav had 27 days to update please update its a good story peace ^_^