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SushiiSquirrel
2005-10-22 . chapter 1
Very few typos for an un-edited piece. Kudos!

While depressing, it's not entirely unrealistic. Teenagers are so easily depressed and they see suicide all over the place so it looks like the best way out.

Dumbledore's regret put a good tone on the whole story. Very nice.

~SushiiSquirrel
Misha
2004-09-13 . chapter 1
Hmm... nice way to deal with feelings... dunno no if this is for me but... Very nice
Voldie on Varsity Track
2004-09-11 . chapter 1
Some of them died twice, do you know that? Anyway, I'm glad everyone died. The HP characters are a ripoff of the LotR characters. (Harry is like Aragorn, Ginny is like Eowyn, Ron is like Eomer...I could go on). So yeah, I don't read HP stuff much because of JKR's lack of originality. THANK YOU FOR KILLING THEM! :)
hpaddictedg
2004-09-10 . chapter 1
I'm not going to flame you; this is really good. Suicidefics are usually really cheesy, but I like this one. The reasons for the suicides are really believable, and I like this a lot. Nice job!
Irrestible
2004-09-10 . chapter 1
That could actually happen.
Not bad considering your mood.
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