Hey, I commented on this at but I loved it! This is a great story!! :-D

Hey!

Another amazingly written and beautifully done chapter. I thought that the letter was appropriate for the feel your going to and I can't wait for another chapter.

Bye, smile :-)

hey this story is going good, and i love the lyrics, Dashboard Confessional is my favorite band. keep on going with the story cant wait to see what happens next!

I'm just reading this now, and i love this chapter. You portrayed Lindsay so well; i feel so sorry for her even though i realy don't like her on the show. glad to see you've extended this!

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Yet another wonderfully written chapter. Seeing everything from Dean's eyes is definitely a new perspective and makes it an intriguing story to read, to know what's going on in his mind and all that. I also thought that the dialogue was amazing.

Bye, smile :-)

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I thought that this eas an excellent piece of fiction from an interesting point of view.

Bye, smile :-)

This was a really unique story. I enjoy how you told it from Lindsay's point of view; not a lot of authors choose to do that because we don't know much about Lindsay's overall character (only a few facets). But you portray her in a belivable style that was good to read. And I loved the lyrics. An awesome song that definitely makes me think of the situation with Dean & Lindsay.
Good job.
~molly~