 milou8 2009-03-27 . chapter 1It surprised me to see you only had one review. It was beautiful! The way you portrayed all the characters was done perfectly. I loved the last line: "And so Gawain watched Lancelot watching Guinevere and Arthur, quietly preparing himself to pick up the pieces for his friend."
And how right he was about Lancelot doing something stupid. Really, very well done! |