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Reviews for: Watching
milou8
2009-03-27 . chapter 1
It surprised me to see you only had one review. It was beautiful! The way you portrayed all the characters was done perfectly. I loved the last line: "And so Gawain watched Lancelot watching Guinevere and Arthur, quietly preparing himself to pick up the pieces for his friend."

And how right he was about Lancelot doing something stupid. Really, very well done!
sulfuric acid
2004-09-12 . chapter 1
Simply beautiful characterizations ^_^
And that part about kissing Galahad senseless blew my brains out... As did the rest of the work. Great job!
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