Sweet fanfic. 5 of 5. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out.

What a great start!
I really got to check out this Dual deal sometime.

a very cool story, update soon

great story i mean GREAT! i started chapter 1 and couldn't stop reading... IM currently working on a new story for Dual that is impsiered from your story.

Write more now I think this is quite a good fanfic please write more

ei, why not update?! don't ever thinking of quitting this fanfic. its going to be such a waste if you abandon this fic. Please can you continue...

hey nice to see a new chapter, i was staring to get worried. its a great chapter and hope it takes less time for the next one to be posted.

This chapter is awsome. Please update sooner than you did this time. I really like this story and I'm a little impacent when waiting for chapter updates. Sorry if I sound bossy but your story is just that good.

I suggest u check out the one with Copy Cat Ken in it. plus there are other stories with Ryouga using the breaking point on other things besides rock. but frankly I just want to drop the whole arguement. PLEASE?

Well in X-Men: Evo they made Juggernaut a mutant but his powers were enhanced by magic...or at least I'm pretty sure they were enhanced by magic. But anyways I did hear Prof X say he had mutant powers. Bakusai Tenketsu does not just work on rocks as it was explained at the end of Ryouga's training. I have seen this move be used on other things besides rocks like soda machines, lamp poles ect. so telling me it only works on rocks is a waste of time. However, you are correct in saying it cannot be used on the human body. I'm not mad nor am I yelling at you. I'm just telling you this for future reference.

why do you take so long to update, huh?

At 11:30pm on june 30th I sat down to check some of the stories I usually read. Apon entering
I though to check to see if some of my favorite shows had any good stories. When finding this one I had planned to go to bed, but decided just to check to see if it was any good. It is now 3:58am and I can only say "Dear god, why couldn't there have been more" I am looking forward to reading this stoy more as it is updated. Good luck.

I love the story guys an cant wait for the continuation

interesting so far.

could you tell me what channel this comes on i saw it before but i dont know what channel it is on now it was a great show i saw it up to where they decide to go to space