This is a really touching fic. It seems so plausible. Kudos to you for not quitting writing Matrix fics - especially after Revolutions - there are so few good ones in this world.

this is quite beautifully done. The emotions are honest... very nice work. thanks - Miran

" a pretty bad job with it"?...
You gotta be kidding. This fic touched me more than any other i've read in the last weeks.

So to be brief, keep having ideas at 2 am and doing "pretty bad jobs" with'em. ;-)