Cute story...nice set up...

I love it! A wonderful story!

awesome story
i didn't really know what to think of it to begin with plot wise i didn't think Hermione would do that but you made it work
the writing was brilliant and the dialog between draco and hermione was oh so funny
but wait there is no but except for the one above
i love this story it's great it's funny it's endearing and it's quite plausible
gotta love a story that could happen
if there were wizards and witches and the world was more interesting in general
anyway i hope you keep updating soon
can't wait for more

beautiful work, i only wish that it could be continued and SOON!
the way you have written this fillet is delish and i have just fallen in love with how you present H and DR as characters.

xoxo

That was entirely lovely. I especially appreciated how you made Hermoine reevaluate her priorities. The changes that prompted in Draco were equally believable. This was just so well done. Great job.

rife with grammatical errors that make reading painful and exhausting, distracting the reader from a possibly entertaining plot

How original, and very true to their characters in my eyes anyway. 25 points to the house of your choice, and you better update!

Sincerely yours,

PFC Jessica Marie Chase

This story is amazing. I love it. I really like how you portrayed both Draco and Hermione, how they have a lot in common and respect each other in some ways, but still don't like each other (at least not at first). However my favorite thing about it - what really made this story great for me - is how Hermione realizes that in response to anti-Muggleborn prejudice she has focused so much on proving herself that she has become arrogant and pushed her parents out of her life, and then how she decides not to continue with the pet project because she doesn't want to be the kind of person who enactes cruel revenge. That was *excellent* - I've seen other fics about Hermione getting revenge on Draco somehow, but not one in which she realizes that in doing so she's kind of putting herself on his level and not living up to her principles (it's much less cliche the way you're doing it too). I also really like how she tells Draco about what she was doing, how this makes him even more interested in her, and how they kind of develop a friendship. I would absolutely love to see where this is going, but I suppose there isn't much chance of it since you haven't updated for two and a half years... You're welcome to surprise me though. :) Now I'm going to go read your other story.

I love your story. It has a superb blend of romance and other plot elements (well a superb blend for a romance genra) and even if your characters aren't completely in character, they still retain enough of their main traits to make a wonderful story. There's just enough detail in your chapters also to make for intriguing reading, drawing you in to the story, but the details aren't abundent enough to drag the reader down with useless information. Some of the more verbose paragraphs could be reduced however. Your writing doesn't attempt to clobber your readers over the head with your intelligence, but uses a varied vocabulary tastefully. I am in awe of the story. Do you have it posted on another site in its completion?

So...it's over? Just like that? Since you haven't been updating since 2 years ago, I'll take my chances and say that it won't be updated in the near future. Therefore, I wanted to tell you that it was just the most wonderful piece of work I've ever seen. I know that technically it seems like it's over, but I can't help hoping that someday, you'll surprised us (me & your other readers) with another wonderfully written chapter. I don't know about anyone else, but my sister & I will always be waiting for the next update. It moved her to tears...

Well, the last thing I always add in my reviews is keep up the good work! Updated soon!

CONGRATULATIONS ON OWNING SUCH A MAGICAL STORY!
~Sarah

well I'm not sure if I got it.. is this the end?
for the time it has passed I guess it is, but I hope it's not..

I like this story a lot, a think you're a awesome writer!

kisses!

pd. add me if you wish

i loved ur story! i love how Hermione is. it isnt over right?

I realize that this is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read. The best of Draco/Hermione, in fact. Unique plot line, not one of those cliched ones where they love each other in two chapters, you honestly have real authot potential.

The "ending" was satisfactory, but technically, incomplete. And obviously, I realize that you are not going to finish this wonderful, indescribable piece of heaven, since that last time you updated was two years ago, but I sincerely thank you for this read. It was a good experience, I can't find a single flaw in it, and thanks.

OMG! You so have to finish this beautiful story, or at least give us another chapter!
I had tears in my eyes (AND I'm at work!!) Please continue!

I truly enjoyed reading this story. The only complaint I have is that some of the paragraps are too long. I don't mean to take words/sentences out but to skip lines. That's all.

anyways, I hope you update soon.