 Coroxn 2/26/11 . chapter 1Impressive. I like how this wasn't dirty. Realistic, impressive, but definitly not dirty. Poor Doyle, another post as the whipping boy...
Nice twist, by the way. I thought it was the whole buffy episode, where Demons posed as councilers took troubled teens to hell, worked them for hundreds of years and popped their corpses back into the human world the next day. The episode was set in LA to, so I was surprised when it was something else.
Nice twist.
I love what you got going here, the characters, their relationships.
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