Impressive. I like how this wasn't dirty. Realistic, impressive, but definitly not dirty. Poor Doyle, another post as the whipping boy...

Nice twist, by the way. I thought it was the whole buffy episode, where Demons posed as councilers took troubled teens to hell, worked them for hundreds of years and popped their corpses back into the human world the next day. The episode was set in LA to, so I was surprised when it was something else.

Nice twist.

I love what you got going here, the characters, their relationships.

10/10

This series is cool. I liked this story a lot. I've loved all your stories, and I'm sure I'll love the future ones, keep up the good work.

That was excellent! I found myself laughing out loud on several occasions. Very well written and I didn't get bored half-way through even though it was rather long (don't get me wrong - in this case long is good). I'll be watching for the next part!

That was really long...and so worth it. Nice homepage, BTW.

oh yeah